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personal odyssey
Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 3:15 am
by trubblecleff
i sit n rock in my seat
head bobbin to the beat
spittin barrages of heat
dodgin defeat
acknowledge and abolish the garbage pawned off as street
when obstacles become impossible
im cool as a tropical breeze
with unstoppable ease
ima collasus amongst bosses
a lyrical monstrosity
a perpetual instruement of terminal velocity
to be a martyr for hip hop
my personal odyssey
Re: personal odyssey
Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 1:10 pm
by MOEstradamus
i sit n rock in my seat
head bobbin to the beat
spittin barrages of heat
dodgin defeat
acknowledge and abolish the garbage pawned off as street
when obstacles become impossible
im cool as a tropical breeze
with unstoppable ease
ima collasus amongst bosses
a lyrical monstrosity
a perpetual instruement of terminal velocity
to be a martyr for hip hop
my personal odyssey
this is probably my favorite drop ive ever seen from you it was a small drop probably sound good on an audio flow thru me off in one spot but other than that it was good. but nothing that will make me want to read it again. it was kinda like that fun read that you only like once keep it up bro
Re: personal odyssey
Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 3:44 am
by trubblecleff
thank you again ill get it
Re: personal odyssey
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:44 am
by FlipSide
For real if u would spit this...i think it would be a hot lil drop... got some nice usage of word in there... u couldhave drop a lil harder tho..im shure u shure know that tho
Re: personal odyssey
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:47 am
by QwarterZ
On the real this just reminds me of Young Dro
like you got that down south swag its purdy good
but if it was in audio you'd be killin' the flow
very nice work man! keep writing n using different styles
Re: personal odyssey
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:21 am
by JDR
Damn. This was hot! You should of made it longer. Nice vocab and use of multies.