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Swallow my sorrow, disintegrated in gods Apollo
deadly sins follow, then exscind your religion hallow
Plundered in deaths dungeon, reason this angle fell
Advocate war and obliterate each prince of hell
Inhale evil toxin , grasp upon insidious scriptures
envision pictures, vivid of voices, and livid whispers
Forbidden sacrifice, a minion in the Lords after life
Forgiven sins always return when disaster strikes
Enticed to devour, worship before every slaughter
Ebullient power, words mix acid and holy water
Deadly rhymes, my microphone decides my fate
Inanimate minds intertwine when death osculates
Slip and score, marks of the horror core sorcerer
Penetrations so deep, I murder the source of war
Abundance of blood lost, and all wounds are soft
Even Death costs, gormandize this food for thought


speakin in tongues and similes, paranormal activity
haunted spirits they speak to me, they all as dead as chivalry
insane like my brain, mentally down chained for days
pain it stays, every inch of cuts sliced from razor blades
locked shut down doors, escapin or mistaken of options
i leave internally, just by these complacent concoctions
laced with cautions, unaware of all these abnormal astoundings
stickers of hazardous symbols controllin all the surroundings
atmosphere seems eerie, the same, alone with the died foes
inner beings are closed, clawing the whole in my soul
got it stitched shut, scars taunting me in rewind
flaunting the crime, of possessed body spirit and mind
bad tasting wounds, adrenaline got me stickin with guns
fiction seems reality, clutchin skulls ligaments numb
fingers collide with my brain, finally im mentally calm
massaging my thoughts, possessed from the start all along

Swallow my sorrow, disintegrated in gods Apollo
deadly sins follow, then exscind your religion hallow
Plundered in deaths dungeon, reason this angle fell
Advocate war and obliterate each prince of hell
Inhale evil toxin , grasp upon insidious scriptures
envision pictures, vivid of voices, and livid whispers
Forbidden sacrifice, a minion in the Lords after life
Forgiven sins always return when disaster strikes
Enticed to devour, worship before every slaughter
Ebullient power, words mix acid and holy water
Deadly rhymes, my microphone decides my fate
Inanimate minds intertwine when death osculates
Slip and score, marks of the horror core sorcerer
Penetrations so deep, I murder the source of war
Abundance of blood lost, and all wounds are soft
Even Death costs, gormandize this food for thought

i liked this flow was on point had multis here and there it seems you are starting to understand what multis are i liked this first part

speakin in tongues and similes, paranormal activity
haunted spirits they speak to me, they all as dead as chivalry
insane like my brain, mentally down chained for days
pain it stays, every inch of cuts sliced from razor blades
locked shut down doors, escapin or mistaken of options
i leave internally, just by these complacent concoctions
laced with cautions, unaware of all these abnormal astoundings
stickers of hazardous symbols controllin all the surroundings
atmosphere seems eerie, the same, alone with the died foes
inner beings are closed, clawing the whole in my soul
got it stitched shut, scars taunting me in rewind
flaunting the crime, of possessed body spirit and mind
bad tasting wounds, adrenaline got me stickin with guns
fiction seems reality, clutchin skulls ligaments numb
fingers collide with my brain, finally im mentally calm
massaging my thoughts, possessed from the start all along

this one was good too i liked the first part better i seemed to lose the flow in a couple spots here but all together probably your best drop youve made so far good shit bro keep it up

thanks for feed n uppin!!!

ur good ur really good keep it up