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cant another bad female take my deal im in my zone nigga
phantom drop 2 tone nigga
bawling on all of yal just like keshia Koles nigga
and i could be dumb sometimes
motha fucka why u think im stupid rich
Evee and if i wanted to boy got enough game i could take ya bitch
let him down my pussy the baddest in the O town yep everybody aint the same
black diammonds in my chain
all the way turnt up aint no turning me down man
ima bad female with a nice frame that goes both ways you know that good shit
i cant lie the game been good to me just like Bun Bitch
C.E.O is who i run with
aint got time for no dumb shit
and with all this ice up in my chain no wonder why im numb bitch
so icy like Gucci Mayne
and my Lingerie come from Gucci Mayne
you know i keep them cash knots
money out of this world astronaunts
i do this shit too easy
i do this with no problem
shout out to SCORPIOS FREAKZ FYNEST because we go to hard
no we go head to head
and we go head off n that hoe
even though i live in the 303 i still represent the O (oakland)
these niggas everywhere i go
you can smell just what i smoke
and if it aint the grand daddy its the purple or the drough
and when i look at ur man ya man gonna be miine
he like my swagg im so Krispy but my name aint Keyoshyne
first things first let me say hi to my hatas
im back now hi hatas
yea bitches hate and imatated
and you know on my calendar u bitches is outdated
step yo game up you know Elizie is the latest
i keep my business to myself
because these hoes just talk to much
im on some rock you know that we drunk as fuk
ok my flow is just the meanest
ya dude want me to ride his penis
and yea ya man be textin me how he want to eat it
brain make him choke like Patien Manny in the Super Bowl
he say girl how low like Ludas song
can can you go
now shout out to Dre
he put me up on game
and he tought me well stuntin
showed me how to get paid

still sexy with that line of yours!!!!!!
can't wait to see you drop more girl!

I used to go by 2tone ha

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This was on sum sexy remy ma... Gansta twist type shit

thanx for the love guys

i liked it.. it was klean..

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cant another bad female take my deal im in my zone nigga
phantom drop 2 tone nigga
bawling on all of yal just like keshia Koles nigga
and i could be dumb sometimes
motha fucka why u think im stupid rich
Evee and if i wanted to boy got enough game i could take ya bitch
didnt like this i hate same word rhymes like that it shows that you are being lazy or you arnt trying and wasnt feeling last line
let him down my pussy the baddest in the O town yep everybody aint the same
black diammonds in my chain
all the way turnt up aint no turning me down man
ima bad female with a nice frame that goes both ways you know that good shit
i cant lie the game been good to me just like Bun Bitch
C.E.O is who i run with
aint got time for no dumb shit
and with all this ice up in my chain no wonder why im numb bitch
ok these are again you've already said alot about your "chain" i dont need to hear it again and again same word lines
so icy like Gucci Mayne
and my Lingerie come from Gucci Mayne
again smh
you know i keep them cash knots
money out of this world astronaunts
weak but you took a shot a mulit here
i do this shit too easy
i do this with no problem
shout out to SCORPIOS FREAKZ FYNEST because we go to hard
no we go head to head
and we go head off n that hoe
even though i live in the 303 i still represent the O (oakland)
these niggas everywhere i go
you can smell just what i smoke
and if it aint the grand daddy its the purple or the drough
and when i look at ur man ya man gonna be miine
he like my swagg im so Krispy but my name aint Keyoshyne
first things first let me say hi to my hatas
im back now hi hatas
yea bitches hate and imatated
and you know on my calendar u bitches is outdated
step yo game up you know Elizie is the latest
i keep my business to myself
because these hoes just talk to much
im on some rock you know that we drunk as fuk
ok my flow is just the meanest
ya dude want me to ride his penis
and yea ya man be textin me how he want to eat it
brain make him choke like Patien Manny in the Super Bowl
he say girl how low like Ludas song
can can you go
now shout out to Dre
he put me up on game
and he tought me well stuntin
showed me how to get paid
and i mean this last bit was again weak choppy flow everywhere at the end but i did see you use the sb line that wasnt great but the best line in your drop


ok well i can see from your feed you got ppl are being nice/kissin your ass.
I mean you have the concept of rhyming together which is good i guess but you have a very low vocab extend your views and your words you will not get anywhere with same word rhymes. Keep trying tho and stick around you will get better and you will start to grasp multis dont give up becuz i gave you constructive feed roll with it learn from it and improve if you want help ask anyone on here they will help you and keep dropping

aint got time for no dumb shit
and with all this ice up in my chain no wonder why im numb bitch


My favorite line right there.

That definitely had to be an audio.
I could almost hear it being rapped over some Luda type beat while I was reading it.
Got some kinky type shit in it, and its also a clever verse, so for that ya remind me of Lil Kim.
Ya definitely got some skill so keep doin ya thing!
Be eazy

Agreed with the dude above... this needs to be on a track.
Nothing outstanding, nothing amazing. Decent.

Nice drop krazy if u do audio u should def record dis not sure if u do audio or not. I agree with Xtaci tho bout da words u should switch it up next time so it could stand out a lil more. Keep dropping pimp

thanks for the feed bak and i see where ou coming from yea its something im in the process of recording freestyling to ALL THE WAY TURNT UP by solja boy i should of uploaded it but i still will thanks for the true feedbak

i can picture you spittin this and if you have the same arrogant attitude in your voice as i see this verse has then you will make this perfect for an audio as long as you spit this with the right attitude you will make a decent song