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witta thrifty spill, of ink i gotta say im pretty ill,
if u say i ain the bad guy, shit my city will,
ill make u see colors n dehydrate like them illy pills,
witta set of illy skills n a pretty silly witty will,
thats why these hoes always wanna lick me still,
got ur head rotatin like - when u spin spreewells,
a civil war is where we'll begin free will,
if u dont see sin they will, ima gorilla so these men they squeel,
strong enough to bend straight steel,
thats why i slap the fake n defend the real,
befriend the trill, i hold the code of honor honestly,
i promise i will no longer be the fallin prodigy,
thats why when i bust on hiphops face i bust on her modestly,
wit modesty, thats why these mcs get "ate/8" like a stop sign,
or get multiple blades to the face, a smooth shave like a mock 5,
ive been written off tho, does this mean ive been gettin soft? no!
im hard as ever, my heart is clever, in this art forever,
no drake buzz but im buzzed enough to have u marked as severed,
i cant drop off, ona page ill leave u outta ur shoes wit no hot sauce,
or a-1 a-o this street ball so see these balls walk on n jus hop off, lol
before i slam it in ur face, then the next week im back in ur place,
runnin shit its a classic case of a drastic rage n then factor the hate,
rather the state of mind, ina creative mind state im one of a kind,
n ima shine n when its time to see me ur the one whos gonna be blind,
so put ur glasses on i hope the protect ur eyes from UV light,
u be aight, slightly tight, watch me ignite the mic,
got u sayin damn ghost when u gon get on cuz U be hype,
fuck u, pay me, or ill steal ur shit n since im in the MI u can sue me twice,
fuck it u can lose ur life, jesus christ, no it is I who be nice,
holdin the mic tight like ur girl be holdin mike tight durin scary movie nights,
damn how long is this, idk but as i go i getta stronger grip,
thinkin yall king kong n shit but yall never conquered shit,
im bonkers bitch, wildn out not like nick but like im from yonkers kids,
not from shaolin but im workin the chambers, nah...but im in the borroughs,
that means im underground, n thats where ima stay gettin it thorough,
for sure tho...

befriend the trill, i hold the code of honor honestly,
i promise i will no longer be the fallin prodigy,

ive been written off tho, does this mean ive been gettin soft? no!

rather the state of mind, ina creative mind state im one of a kind,

U had some nice multies and flow in there..tho it was long...straight up key i can tell.. but there was some shine up in there dude.. if u would have concetrated into a smaller piece it could have been a great drop.... wordplay was on point on some lines as well.. a multidimentional drop dude... nice...

This was purdy nice, reminds me of Cam'ron
the way he uses some words and whatever
thats how I feel about this it also reminds me of a freestyle-ish thing
like you could walk on stage and just start it off like this
then just let the beat build......bitch....lulz @ Wayne
either way this is nice!

Oh, you're back. Good job haha. Although I generally prefer longer pieces, it doesn't ever seem to work in key. The piece dragged on in the beginning, was fire in the middle, and right around where you mention the length yourself, it goes back to shit. I'm not personally a fan of keystyle in general though, so take it for what it is lol.

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-- 11 Jun 2010 22:56 --

Oh, you're back. Good job haha. Although I generally prefer longer pieces, it doesn't ever seem to work in key. The piece dragged on in the beginning, was fire in the middle, and right around where you mention the length yourself, it goes back to shit. I'm not personally a fan of keystyle in general though, so take it for what it is lol.