Airplanes Part 3

[MohammedT]

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Feedback appreciated thanks.

[MOEstradamus]

first verse was tight i liked it i mean it was better in some parts lyrically you are good but nothing to great that was on this site you seemed to try and force your flow where and there that kinda made me lose it here and there. 2nd verse is the same as the first to me neither of it was greatly remembered to me.. overall i liked it i could deffently listen to this again i liked it keep droppin other shit i wana see some more from ya..

also do you record at a studio or kinda your own place

[MohammedT]

Punchlines and beats like this are pretty new to me, i'm trying to branch out and try new things. I'll try to work on getting my flow down perfect. and yeah i just record at the house, i just get high and do this for fun.



Edit: thanks a lot for the feedback homie.

[MOEstradamus]

yea its great for you to branch out to different styles will help you improve greatly

[Lawgix]

God Hayley Williams is so HOT!!!!! *ahem* sorry... newayz lyrics are tight... flow is on point... beats edited nice... real smooth... is this ur first track??? fell off a few points but picked it back up real smooth... nice shit man... keep droppin cuz i wanna hear more!!! give it a 8/10 good job homie... keep it up man!

[Darth Vader]

Yeah for real..this is a proper drop. I'm feelin the flow its tight. Music always comes out sounding its best when you're having fun with it and I can tell you were doing that. Good one. Drop more I wanna hear you elevate bro. 1Luv

[STUD_PHaMOUS]

pretty nice track, the first verse was mos deffo the best part.. you did some type of justice to the beat

[MohammedT]

thanks for the love ya'll