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It's just what I collide with, loud noises silence
a midlife crisis before my midlife can find this
mixed with peace, revolutions or modern defiance
we revolt, but we end up fighting for alignment
but when you sides is about to flip it's crazy
they can't faze me, threaten me or whatever, I'm lazy
spit beyond a 16, ate teens no pedophile, go head hate me
this injustice became so fucked with it's assumption
it's hatred it's dumb shit, I'm one they cannot fuck with
with creativity that could cause my ambition to flutter
flying undercover, I can cause euphoria if I went in
missin' what I got for em my complexity is stressin'
my motives could cause such a problem, words me sewn
I got up once but Double FL now it just hurts me soul
although the time riff can't find this whole imposed flow
bust out ceiling my concepts became distilled like Ripostes poems
yet I cannot find a certain name to help or even describe me
realizing there is no one like but one no one might see
it just might be a evolution to the next step representin' me
I leave da prints with poetic passion and cause this Xtaci
yes I love to do this but it has become a problem droppin'
it's like I'm caught in, lost in the promonince of nonsense
I'm so confused I feel like rippin' the cords from my keyboard
rippin' up my notebooks and droppin' of the world but be-fore
I do I got somethin' to say..........this whole persona don't fit me anymore
I'm lost....I'm caught up in a synthesis tryna break down atoms
tryna discover another planet, tryna figure life out without graspin'...
the realities I'm givin', fuck a facebook I hate havin' to say hi
I hate myspace without some dumb bitch tellin' me comment her pics yea right
fuck you, fuck you and your 20 million friends that make you think your so hot
fuck the world I'm feelin' down today tomorrow this same life might go pop
just to get a record and be heard, maybe not....fuck I'm I'm gone...say word

Dope drop. Heat kind of fell off towards the end but I was diggin' almost every bit of it. The flow was nice and easy to follow.

t's just what I collide with, loud noises silence
a midlife crisis before my midlife can find this

Favorite lines is ya first bar.

this injustice became so fucked with it's assumption
it's hatred it's dumb shit, I'm one they cannot fuck with

Simple bar but I was diggin on it.

Good drop..

good shit QZ diggin the flow of the shorter lines

fav line was already stated

fell off towards the end like jack said but i was feeling it

stay ^

Hmm,
I was wondering if you really had some skill.
Tight ass verse!
I liked it all the way through, it never got boring.
I was feeling it. I be feeling the same way.
The end was pritty moving too, right about where ya started on the facebook shit on.
Nice ass verse.
You proved me wrong, you do have some skill.
Be Eazy

Solid piece. This was a good read.
Overall just nice.

nice drop intro was sick I liked how u opened it up I didn't really like how it ended tho u did fell off a lil bit still good drop tho dawg

fav lines
but when you sides is about to flip it's crazy
they can't faze me, threaten me or whatever, I'm lazy
spit beyond a 16, ate teens no pedophile, go head hate me

this injustice became so fucked with it's assumption
it's hatred it's dumb shit, I'm one they cannot fuck with

yet I cannot find a certain name to help or even describe me
realizing there is no one like but one no one might see
it just might be a evolution to the next step representin' me
I leave da prints with poetic passion and cause this Xtaci

the realities I'm givin', fuck a facebook I hate havin' to say hi
I hate myspace without some dumb bitch tellin' me comment her pics yea right

keep dropping

yes I love to do this but it has become a problem droppin'
it's like I'm caught in, lost in the promonince of nonsense
I'm so confused I feel like rippin' the cords from my keyboard
rippin' up my notebooks and droppin' of the world but be-fore
I do I got somethin' to say..........this whole persona don't fit me anymore

Hits deep right there..... thanks for the honorable mention too lulz.... i really felt this piece more toward the end when it was just raw...more emotion ..it definitly sticks out to me... nice drop