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You may have heard my name, you may have heard it once before
then you know I prefer to claim, that with verse-wording I'ma Pro
I'll conjur verbs up through the floor, then like a surgeon I'ma sew
together words and every person that observes it's gonna know
The Perfect curse at my flow, cuz they've unearthed a worthy foe
it's elementary, my mental be, the fire to their snow
I'll retire when I'm old, now I write rhymes on a page
to quit or part is absurd, it'd incite riots today
I put my 'heart' in my work, so I shine like 'diamonds' on stage
the skill in 'clubs' you exert, homie I got it in 'spades'
The top is my place, not even rockets are safe
yea I'm the hottest to date, you're in your awdwardest phase
just stop with the games, the questions, riddles and squalling
cuz I'm flawlessly ballin', the rest are crippled and crawling
I'm simply enthralling, always climbing no stalling
when I drop my mixtape, that's the only thing that's falling

Decent. I liked how you kept up with the scheme and didn't flip it. Multies were nice. Could of threw a couple of dope punches in there but either way, pretty dope homie.

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just stop with the games, the questions, riddles and squalling
cuz I'm flawlessly ballin', the rest are crippled and crawling

DaPrince wrote:You may have heard my name, you may have heard it once before
then you know I prefer to claim, that with verse-wording I'ma Pro

At first I was like WTF?..that didn't rhyme.
Then I seen what it was.
Maybe if ya woulda said, 'befo', lol, that dont look right though huh?
I guess you did it right. I just had to read it twice to understand the rhyme, then I said OOO, I see whats up, he is rhyming.
After i got past that, the whole damn flow rhymed like a mothafucka.
And it was slick too.
Maybe you should make that an audio.
Tight flow and good rhyming fam.
Be eazy.

cuz I'm flawlessly ballin', the rest are crippled and crawling

hahaha love that line.
This piece had a special appeal to it...
It had a solid flow and lyrics and whatever.
But there something else that makes it sick to me... Hmm.

just stop with the games, the questions, riddles and squalling
cuz I'm flawlessly ballin', the rest are crippled and crawling
I'm simply enthralling, always climbing no stalling
when I drop my mixtape, that's the only thing that's falling

Great way to end this piece... lil different style from what im used to...or not.. but definitly had sum multies in there and flowed very well... Ups