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Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:12 pm
by Brah-Vo
Im a monster, a hazy mess of blinded thoughts
only remains of my haters is an outline in chalk
and i just dare you to try and find me boss
theres a price to pay and fam your lifes the cost
burn you, coz this wicks wax/whack
timberwolf him, sprewell's on
you'll hear the click clack
like your putting a seatbelt on
This dudes an ass like he's wearing his pants low
i'll commit the crime and frame him, wasup Van Gogh
Murk him where he stands yo
coz my trance flow make all the girls dance slow
Tie up all your loose ends, weak A.F, you'll lose friend
it'll be this fools end, leave him with blue balls like hadouken
I go around, never been slippin E's but i be dissin fiends
So i guess i just have to blast this germ like Listerine
And honestly ya girl be missin me
I admit im real cool, but the steel of the gun be colder
And apparently asians cant drive, i might just run you over
Still you mouthin off like this gook acts a fool
but i wont hesitate coz everyday i cook cats like you ;)

Re: Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:43 pm
by $eR!oU$ SK!LL
Shit that was tight homey.
I dont understand why you 0 and 12 with flow like that.
Maybe you lackin the punches.
But the metaphors are there fa sho.
Your flows on point.
I dont see really no flaws.
Tight shit, keep doin your thing!
Be eazy

Re: Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:36 am
by FlipSide
Wow at that last bar man......see this is what i was talking about...sick metaphors and sick flow... i see u be on this for a while and people here know u so no d'respect on that other drop..but this was TIGHT... worth my time to read and enjoy and even learn a lil...Ups

Re: Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:19 am
by Brah-Vo
No problem my dude.
Thanks for the feed bros

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Uppin

Re: Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 4:59 pm
by - Mutual -
this was pretty nice, had some nice punchlines, and the rhyme scheme was nice too keep me on my toes had some dope punches aswell and like Flip said that last bar was dope as hell, was nothin to the others cus it was all good though keep bringin that shit man

Re: Raiza Sharp Gets In

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:05 pm
by Arvincible
"leave him with blue balls like hadouken"

hahahahah amazing



i havent read a scripture in a minute and this is some good stuff


keep writing man u went from wack to crack on this one