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Multies:
Wordplay/Nameplay:
Punches:
Personals:
Enjoyment:

U Have 2 Days Consider This My Check & G/L!!
Extended Till Tomorrow Nite...

eckchay

R.A.I..

Fuck This Faggot I'll Stab em in His Eye, Throw em Down The Stairs Then I'll Kick em From Behind.
& When Peeps Vote, We Type Mavis Beacon in The Address Bar 2 Inspect His Keystrokes!!

Don't Gotta Go Hard Just Rap A Few Rhymes, Throw A Few Bars n Detach A Few Lives.
Then I'll Laugh A Few Times Cuz R Holden Balls Deep Like The Catcher in the R.A.I/Rye!!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Catcher_in_the_Rye

R.A.I I'll Scar Ya Few Crude Lines, Ya Doomed When Lyrics KA-BOOM It'll Blow Ya Mind
R's Only included The Picture When His Photo's in A Key Chain or Shown in A Slide!!

Truly Gifted When I'm Spittin', Initial My Username Up in Scripts
R's Like Salt -n- Juice Cuz You'll Never See em in The Mix!!

I'm Bored You Bout 2 Make Me Drool n Get Sum R&R Heh Heh No Really
Spark This L* Only Thing RAIZA SHARP is My Knife When it Guts A Philly!!
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/raiza ... 17040.html

Holla

Expos:
2nd Bar Holden is The Main Character of The Catcher in the Rye
5th Bar R.A.I's Alias Also I Believe is RAIZA SHARP
Rest is Pretty Explanatory!!

On time whoop.
Respect for the elevation, but im about bring you down again _______________________________________________
Spose i have to expo:
*Im asian. figure it out.
**street fighter character who stretch his limbs to attack.
***ultra violet rays... from the sun... get it?

Imma have to give this one to Cre@tive, I like the few punches he has, i like his rhyme style better, Not saying R.A.I.'s wasnt good, cuz it was but its like R.A.I. stabbed Cre@tive with a pear knife when Cre@tive chopped him with a butcher knife, Cre@tive lines were long but easy to follow the flow, R.A.I. just to plain for me.
Good Battle Guys

Vote Cre@tive

~~Deciple~~

thanks for the vote bro. 1-0

this lames dissed, your raps are tastseless
your bars are played kid,so why's your name creative?

Meh?...... Weak Opener

Fuck This Faggot I'll Stab em in His Eye, Throw em Down The Stairs Then I'll Kick em From Behind.
& When Peeps Vote, We Type Mavis Beacon in The Address Bar 2 Inspect His Keystrokes!!

Meh?...There was some sort of a sumthing there... but having to find out what beacon was made it equally weak....

Leave you burnt like you in summer in a two piece
you a fool C, Creative couldnt "see Rays/Raiz" as if i was U-V***

This was Just...And i Say just ok...Cuz u name played ur name not his.

I'm Bored You Bout 2 Make Me Drool n Get Sum R&R Heh Heh No Really
Spark This L* Only Thing RAIZA SHARP is My Knife When it Guts A Philly!!

This was ok.... As well a lil better cuz of the name play ...

Ok im only voting cuz people here fucking suck and dont vote on shit which in turn leads to in activity and people not battling........

Aiight so im not breaking down lil titles on which to vote on...FUCK THAT ...i just woke up....

Im just going to say RAI ur flow was on point but ur punches lacked weight... A couple played hits in there and a couple misses.... Creative... U hit a lil better got a lil name play in there which was original ..whith that philly line and all...Now ur openers sucked ass...sorry guys...and the closers were just alil better... Over all my vote goes to creative... But creative ur bars are long...kinda like i did on my battle with lawgix...now that im voting i see its relevance...If thats even spelled right...Count it if u want...if not FUCK a Goat Off A Cliff...Fuckers... Now im going to work

GL
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Multies - tie ( neither of the drops contained solid 3 or 4 syllable rhymes.. )

Wordplay/Nameplay - Creative ( Creative had the edge on this category, but I liked RAI's work in this aspect too. )

Punches - Creative ( I gave this category to Creative cause he structured his punches in a manner to hit with more force. If RAI would've structured his punches better, I might've given him this category )

Personals - Tie

Enjoyment - RAI ( I just enjoyed reading his more. It might have been because some of Creative's rhymes were forced, but also, RAI's bars were more funny to me. )

Overall, I'm gonna give my vote to Creative

Both rhymes were a decent read. Congratulations on the win, Creative.

3-0 good battle

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