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Nah You Have To Write Til It Surges Dispite Any Urges No Fights To Disturb It
I'm Right On This Earth With A Knighthood That Purges A Fright Into Perfect
I'm In Sight To Be Earnest Direct To The Mark With Neglect No Respect For This Cleark
Eject Your Remarks Cus I'll Have You Missin Every Punch Like That Last Step In The Dark!!
I'm Quick To Ruptures Fiends And Have'em Fucked With Structured Dreams
Stuck Strut To A Cutless Gleam Abduct To Conduct Such Wreckless Themes
Corrupt To A Fucked Up Gene Nuts When You Sucked Up Streams
Bucked To Enduct Such Steam Nothin But Luck To Accept My Green
I'm Above Average With Writing A Savage To Spite Them
I'll Ravage On Titans A Manic To Tyrants Time To Panic With Violence
Romantic With Rhyming Titanic With Giants Across Planets Enlightened
Silence Satanic So Vibrant I Jack Son's Like Janet Gone Fight'em
I'm Packed To The Rim Infact I'm Trapped But Mapped Out To Win
Snapped Out With Wind But Back Slapped To Rap Bout My Sins
I'm Switching The Rhymes Crippling These Mimes Bitching With Lines
Leaving Stitching Intwined Slit Ripped Twitching In Time
Fixing These Swines Slipped Down Skipped, Ignored In The Dirt
I Boar Into Work, One Gore Will Leave Hurt Poor And These Jerks
Can't Take This Away You Faking Like Prey,Dead, I Mean Pray
That I Wont Rip You Apart And Leave Ya Head In The Hay

Wrote In About 20 mins To Half An Hour, Leave A Link Feed Will Be Returned Asap

Stuck Strut To A Cutless Gleam Abduct To Conduct Such Wreckless Themes
Corrupt To A Fucked Up Gene Nuts When You Sucked Up Streams
Bucked To Enduct Such Steam Nothin But Luck To Accept My Green


^^^THIS MA SHIT DAWG. DAMN. I SPIT IT OUT LOUD AND SHIT FLOWED ILL. FOR A QUICKIE THIS IS KU MAN. I NEEDA LEARN HOW TO STRUCTURE MY VERSES SO THEY SOUND KINDA LIKE IM SPITTIN IT. I DUNNO ANYWAY....THIS WAS PRETTY DOPE MAN.

This was purdy sick my dude, I'm diggin' the flow
the style was out there, but it kept me interested
very sick punches in there aswell, I like this, don't see you drop that much
unless I gotta listen for it, either good shit brah, keep writing!

I'm Packed To The Rim Infact I'm Trapped But Mapped Out To Win
Snapped Out With Wind But Back Slapped To Rap Bout My Sins

this shit flowed great
enjoyed the read
but now every time i read your flows i spit em all british accent like but it works

constructive
some of your multis seem a lil too spread out structure was off puttin
but overall a solid drop

thanks for all the feed will be returned now

You killed it with the multiple flow... it had me reading ion cadence in shit...lol...which basically means that this would sound hot if u spit it... I most def enjoyed the piece even tho it took me a whole day to read..my bad...i had peeped it but didnt drop feed...so u get a double feed...

I'm In Sight To Be Earnest Direct To The Mark With Neglect No Respect For This Cleark
Eject Your Remarks Cus I'll Have You Missin Every Punch Like That Last Step In The Dark!!
I'm Quick To Ruptures Fiends And Have'em Fucked With Structured Dreams
Stuck Strut To A Cutless Gleam Abduct To Conduct Such Wreckless Themes
Corrupt To A Fucked Up Gene Nuts When You Sucked Up Streams
Bucked To Enduct Such Steam Nothin But Luck To Accept My Green

Had to quote that... i think u were zoning right here...

Thanks For The Feed Man, Preciated

Messiah killed it with this one

that's Mutual bro......lulz

Can We Have Some Elaborations Lmao

Thanks TOYH Much Preciated And Yeah I'm Cutting Down My Bars Now Thanks Again