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i stand stern not under firm ground
but self pride and honor cant be turned down
i'd burn down this bitch if i could learn how
just give me the means flame an gasoline
tired of the power to build or smash my dreams
im attached to seams rippin and distractin me
so i'm pissed off ticked off bout had enough
most peoples backs would crush holdin half the stuff
that builds and builds til it cracks the struts
my back is up against the wall feelin pressured
feel like a dog chokin himself at the end, tethered
like all i've treasured is gone away forever
its got me convinced on leavin in a blaze of glory
being on the front page news an amazin story
a man took away before he was paid his proceeds
now i'm runnin being overcomed with numbness
shitty life is subject to trials like the poor of us
as the rest of the public stands grounded like pumas
i'm lookin at this loaded glock fallin from the summit

Looks like your switchin' up your flow
purdy dope to be honest, I like the honesty in this one
the beginning is what set it off for me, that whole I'd burn this shit down
if I knew how, I like that, very sick ish mayne
keep writing!

thanks Qz uppin

this was nice, had a solid flow throughout, you switched rhymes well,

so i'm pissed off ticked off bout had enough
most peoples backs would crush holdin half the stuff
that builds and builds til it cracks the struts

those were dope bars, the whole things was a solid piece but those bars were killing it, this is a good consistent drop keep doin what you do man

just give me the means flame an gasoline
tired of the power to build or smash my dreams
im attached to seams rippin and distractin me
so i'm pissed off ticked off bout had enough
most peoples backs would crush holdin half the stuff
that builds and builds til it cracks the struts

Dam i pressed a button and my whole feed deleted ...so here we go again....

This is a good day in illest if people are getting to real drops like this.. it was deep and flowed well i also noticed that the metas were almost obselete..which is a relief cuz when i go in on deep drops i do that as well ...U relied on pure flow and emotion to make this a dope drop.... And i can Diggit!!! LOL

thankx for the feed Flip and Mutual uppin