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Just a random punch verse written for a collab. Feedback will be returned.

Let’s get down to business, stop lookin you found the sickest
X Box or Game Cube, but I’m never playing around bitches
If beef is mal-nutritious, my physique’s about as thin as
an Asian gymnast who’s been training to make the Olympics

my cadence makes a difference...a rhythm bound with lyrics
my words hold weight, your styles based on calisthenics
devour critics, you couldn’t pay me to spit it worse
my prowess bitches, like the Yankees, cause my pennants first

the upper escholon, don’t ever disrespect it y’all
we could battle, put dough on the line like it’s a telethon
Embarrassing bitch, you pay to see a pair of some tits
cause a free throw’s your only shot at a charity strip

prepare to be ripped, but to stop this genocide on rappers
I gotta hold back more than fuckin’ chiropractors
treating spinal fractures....I’ll put you under C
under toe on flows, rip the tidal from the king

Stickin skeleton keys in my rib cage, start to open it
Like listen this is straight from the heart, I got a bone to pick
I’m dope like any opiate...wanna test this individual?
you’ll see me dump-in-a-clip like a shit fetish video

not bad.. but keep up the guud work.. i like da multi's tho..

A bit contradictory but thanks none the less. lol