Hip Hop Forum

5 bars
two rounds
feeding allowed

XYYX system:

Jack - X
I'm - Y


Good luck, peace!

Ill advised on the call out but I gotchu. I'll drop soon nigga. G/L.

-- Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:31 am --

Str8 Key, no need to map out this nigga.

yo...

Heres a wealth of knowledge, juss dodge Rip, before ya healths a prob kidd
But who da hell could top this, niggas so pathetic he left his self a comment!
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/profi ... 21%20lvlE/

You can tell ya not shit, popped, kicked, Imma abuse ya best try
How could I take a nigga serious that got confused with a deaf guy??

You justa a newb that was left dry, and he aint knowin' hip hop
He'd have a harder time comin' up on the street than a broken flip flop

You a joke to Rips drop, tha kidds hot, don't even plan to spit
I'll put a hand in this, another Eminem groupie? I can't STAN tha shit

Imma man the script juss to damage it, I turn the poundin's to welts
Look at this niggas picture, I don't need to make jokes when he clownin' his self

But that shit you rap is chicken scratch and I'll have you chasin' the wire
I'm aimin' to fire, cuz this nigga couldn't handle Jack if he was changin' a tire

fuget it nigga..

This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike. The whole six pack
You think if I'm a Stan i won't diss back? check this Jack

Damn man, confusing me with a deaf guy, that's an epic fail
I couldn't feel your shit, even i you wrote it in braille

Jack the Rippa, man check the zippa' you're like a mini me strip pole
Gotta admit, the shit you spit is tight! did it came outta a virgin asshole

Since his first bar, Jack has been in a gradual decline
I’ll win this automatic, cuz ya need a manual to rhyme

Are you joking? You must be, cuz that round looked like sleep talking,
Do like Johnny and keep Walking, in that round, were you farting?

See, I'm different, the type you cant simply tame or handle
But dude, ya skillz're so remote, I use'em to change the channel!

C'mon Jackie stop acting Chan, you ain't a "rippa" stop swearin' man
Cuz you're chances of winning are slimmer than the pantie's you' wearin' http://www.gerweck.net/ronsimmons.jpg

Fat ass nigga with tits hanging like a Hooter
Girls run away from u, the only thing you turn on "is a computer"

I'm not beefin' after this shit's over I'll add you as a friend
But understand, you'll win this only if we trade places in THE END!


P.S.
I had to spit second, so you didn’t have to change your pre-written verse
You could’ve spit first, middle or last, your drops made you look worse



stop underestimating me!

stop underestimating me

to me it seems he had all the reason in the world to underestimate you.

you need help on your bars kid

u talk like u were better...

Jack took it. Hands down like a handstand.

i really dont want to elaborate why Jack won this..

so blah blah blah....Ripp took this easily...in every category... punches, multis flow all that...

and to the other dude, change ur name, that shit is gay and annoying...

vote - ripp

listen people its a two round battle so save ur comments for the next round

I guess it's 3-0... KO... Congrats man.. good one!

-- Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:52 pm --

K KiLLaH wrote:listen people its a two round battle so save ur comments for the next round

it's not like i'ma win or something! they've already made up their minds. i'm fine with it....

p.s. did is sucked that bad? i thought it was a decent round.. donno... "bla bla bla is not really elaborate"

thats cuz i said i didnt feel like elaborating, its self explanatory why u lost. no need for a 2nd round.

i know... it's okay... get it over with already! on to the next one...

It's w/e. I accepted ya call out for 2 rnds. If you wanna go 2 then i'll key somethin' up or you can drop somethin' but if you wanna stop at 1 than it's w/e. I don't care either way homie.

u talk like u were better..

lol. everyone that posted on this is better than you.

shady you need feed and help bro it wasnt bad maybe if jack was on a lower level it would have been close but jack has some tight ass punches bro but keep at it bro dont just say fuck it

hes clearly a new jack (no Christopher Rios intended)((think about it))
...anyways..instead of telling u why u suck, imma show u why THEY think u suck


This new guy'll do you, plus 5 alike. The whole six pack
You think if I'm a Stan i won't diss back? check this Jack

This is a diss, not a punch

Damn man, confusing me with a deaf guy, that's an epic fail
I couldn't feel your shit, even i you wrote it in braille

That braille line has been used to death


Jack the Rippa, man check the zippa' you're like a mini me strip pole
Gotta admit, the shit you spit is tight! did it came outta a virgin asshole
THIS DOESNT RHYME...plus its stupid


Since his first bar, Jack has been in a gradual decline
I’ll win this automatic, cuz ya need a manual to rhyme

This is decent, but u coulda done more with it, perhaphs throw another multi in there " in comparisson, his styles casual to mine, its like im on a lateral to prime & hes at gradual decline....& so on...

Are you joking? You must be, cuz that round looked like sleep talking,
Do like Johnny and keep Walking, in that round, were you farting?
The fuck?



See, I'm different, the type you cant simply tame or handle
But dude, ya skillz're so remote, I use'em to change the channel!
Trash

C'mon Jackie stop acting Chan, you ain't a "rippa" stop swearin' man
Cuz you're chances of winning are slimmer than the pantie's you' wearin' http://www.gerweck.net/ronsimmons.jpg
I'm not clickingoin that link......on a side note, remember some people read this stuff mobile....so they aint clickin links to other sites

Fat ass nigga with tits hanging like a Hooter
Girls run away from u, the only thing you turn on "is a computer"
Tits hanging like a hooter?? thats like saying feline meowing like a cat

I'm not beefin' after this shit's over I'll add you as a friend
But understand, you'll win this only if we trade places in THE END!
BAD LOOK, since you lost



I think u might wanna type ya verses, then revise them & see what makes sense & what doesnt...whats a diss & whats a punch...what is just filler...& what is just not gonna hit ya opponent hard enough...dont bring a butter knife to a sword fight...hopefully that was helpfull...if not,... go fuck yaself