Hip Hop Forum

[Bridge]

[V 1 Jobe]
Ugh, I guess I could've said that
Good women I made committments to, I should've meant that
Even that I know everything she say was true
I didnt want to face the truth

Living life in the fast lane, I'm used to make it go
Chasing and playing whoes, but now them days is throwed
The game is old, it's time for me take things slow
So, I'd change it though

First time we met, you were into me
Even though eventually, we been threw things
I guess we were meant to be

Reflection of self, when I'm drinkin' liquor
I remember the good times bein' with her
She's the one I could smile bein' with her

This is my love thing for you
This is one thing or two
You love the way I sing for you
I love you baby, we can do the unthinkable

[Bridge]

[Chorus]

[V 2 Paige]
yo dey told me u would never be faithful/
but i got faith in u/
muslims prayin under da table/
when i met u/
i knew u was the real deal/
had me feelin u/
like an x pill/
dey said that we would never last/
soon i would be yo past/
i just let them pass judgement/
they love doin that/
friends told me stay away /
i refused to listen. / condoms in my ear
/ fuck the critics/ ur my life/
somthin like my legacy/ cant live without u
/ we were meant to be/ we can stand alone in dis world/ just u and me/
we all make mistakes/
but your love is redeemable/
member back wen we wudnt last/ well now breakin up is unthinkable

[Chorus]

Yooo man this is progress homie. You went for emotion in this. I like it, this could still use alotta work tho. Work on your structure and dig deep for those lyrics ya digg... anyways keep em comin my infant

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

thanx fo tha feedback.. i appreciate it

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

nice drop $~@mbition~$

i appreciate the feedbaks.. thanxz.

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

-- Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:26 pm --

This remix is with my girlfriend

-- Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:10 am --

appreciate the feeds