Hip Hop Forum

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I walked and crossed the valley of Jeruselum
Run away after we were shootin' 'em
This basic rap, is laced with facts
All truths and no fiction and, this is fo' whom of those listenin'
In the streets I'm used to gettin' beatin', jump me and kick his teeth in
Now, me and my possi straight thuggin'
Fuck with us, and we leave ya face bloody
"Abra Kadabra"; except this no magic act
Mobbin' niggaz is what my status lacks
Gonzo wondering why I start writing 'em things, it's gone end once ya stop biting emcees
Mad cause ThaOneYouHate said I had potiential, which I; do I can kill niggaz with no pencil
Bitch this aint so motherfucking singin' or rap, I'm speakin' on facts, fo you niggaz stealin' my lyrics WERE GONE HEAT 'EM FOR THAT
Lyricalfuckingbeast is runnin' his lips, I bustin this clip, in front of his bitch
I'm unlike any other I'm not your average, buckwilded like a fuckin' hostel savage
Others you niggaz pipe down, I flip this switch and lights out
And RainMan, what name is that? Ya whole game is whack
Creative your afraid to rap, and ya ashamed to ask
Rugged come out the closet bitch, he havin' Gonzo rockin his thongs and shit
Your game was weak,watch me rein supreme, and now I take ya dreams
But either way, I'm gone heat the place
Still aint got no talents and dont want no challenge, cause I'm ill
I hit 'em with the doser, with this gallon of NyQuil
If you got a problem with this bitch, you solve him with this clip
After seven shots, now weapon dropped, it's too crowded and heaven's clogged, but hell is not
I'm the best emcee known wreck raps, leave these vets smashed, and necks snapped
My little nigga Khari, kill yall in a heartbeat
I'm tired of these whack rappers, includin' the back stabbers
I get in his brain, Gonzo gettin' insane, worried about me killin' his game
All you hear is glory, picture all of the nation kneel before me
He blaspheme and dictates, saying he's God and his scripts great??
It's irrelevant, nigga thought he was heaven sent
Get pissed off and mad, bitch real hip hop is back

-- Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:03 pm --

Gonzo Killa, Creative killa, RainMan killa, Rugged killa, & Lyricalbeast killa

-- Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:06 pm --

If you down wit 'em, fuck you too..

-- Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:07 pm --

We ride on these fools.. ha ha

What Are You Tupac Shakur's Son? Lmaoo

Alright raps.

Dude stop beefing... cant u see no ones appreciating that.. i mean if u had some skill and credibility then people would find the beef acceptable.. but the only thing u bringing is spam to the table... try dropping original shit KID... i knew i did not want to read this but now u half moon...making an ass out cha self.. i would like to see u get good at WRITING so u can call niggas out... but other than that u butt cheeks like a 500 pound bitch wearing a thong.. at the beach tryna put sunscream on the smalls of her back...

LMFAOOOO

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Maybe you should branch out as far as subject matter goes. Try to test yourself by trying to write a rhyme about something no one else has touched on. The thug shit is very generic at this point, no offense.