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5-8 Bars
No D/r
No Recycles
Due 48 after he checks

Check

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-- Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:22 am --













It should be easy to understand but i've wrote some pointers anyway!


-If u rearrange the letters of "Sacred" and "Verse" you'll get "scared" and "serve"
-Backwards shady is "ydahs" which forms a "you did a holly shit"
-Def-init
is a user on "Illest" that had a battle with Sacred in which Sacred was almost DQ due to a NoShow
-A hockey match uses a puck instead of balls.
-He has a signature with "The Game" which has a LA tatto on his cheek
-Cock fight = rooster fight
the last bar should be easy.




I've took the advices that were given to me! Hope this is an improvement from the other battles i had


G.L. Sacred!

Peace!

I gotta admit, ya fruity scripts got me grinnin, an easy win.. an all witout clappin the Tool/
Cuz the only "clap from the crowd" you get drips from the tip of the dick when it drips wit some Lube!/

I know what ya'll thinkin, my skin is white so my flow must be stinking, quit thinkin Bitchin/
Cuz I flow like this bitch in the Kitchen, sprayin steady like Shady when he soapin the Dishes!/

I hate this kid, settin me back in the game, shoulda fucked his mother wit a tire iron, home Abortion!/
Cuz this battle was over before it started, summit like fucking his Mother, cuz its an easy "Four-Fit"/

You see his reckless flow! Flailin, reachin for his punches, and they still Missin Me!
A fictious G, quit the act, you aint a rapper, you a acta, you aint a "balla" like Vasectomies!/

But on that Infamous Tip I'ma Spit a Ridiculous Script to Flip the Script and Disfigure this Bitch!/
Cuz you aint got the weapon in reach when you steppin to me, one right hook'll leak you like a syphilis Drip!/

Damn... well votes up....

damn man waited 4 that like forever )... anyway good luck.. didn't want no DQ.

peace!

Thanks for the extra day man, I posted as soon as I got home today. Mad props! Votes up!

1-0 Uppin!

Cat sweep - Verse

Your improving Shady. Your directed more of your verse against your opp. so props on that.

Verse, you had some decent lines that did enuff to take the battle.

1/Out

2-0 Uppin. Yea, I'm a little rusty, I'm more of a topical cat myself, but I dig the battle seen every once in a while

Punches: Verse
Multies: Verse
Flow: Verse
Structure: Verse
Personals: Verse

Overall A Cat Sweep, My Advice Shady Look At Other Peoples Constructed Battles & Try To Figure Your Style.

Peace

3-0 Me, TKO I believe?

congrats man! i want a rematch after i get better!

just a KO

4-1 is a TKO

-battle closed records updated-