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1 Hour Ta Cook M-Vario, Call Play, Loose Ball 2 The Variable NFL Shit, Carry Ya Figure Homes
Free Weight Off A Loaded Gun, Outlaws With Cock Spurs & 1 Spin'll Levitate Ya "Barrel Roll"

I Switch Flows Like C's P.R., M-V Known As "Tito Fairbanks"
Each Lyric'll Leave Ya Scarred & Pump Ya Chest Like A Respiratory Air Tank

Spot A Faker When I See 1, I Blow Spliffs in Jamaica
Being Gangsta Ain't Cha Nature, So How is You Major?

This is Over? Naah.. Not By A Long-shot, Toe Ta Toe "Ya Draggin' Ya Feet Kid" Flat Footers Just Don't Box
Each Line is Like Ya Delivery.. Slow, Improve Ya Flow, Only Then U Earn The Deed Of Me Callin' Ya Smallpox

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Punches - Creative
Flow - M-Vario
Vote - Creative.

Could of been better coz I seen yall drop a lot better but Creative had a couple more hotter punches. Close but either way, decent

1/out

i totally see this different. i agree this battle was rather weak and ive seen MV come waay harder.

punches: MV.. his actually made sense. no, they werent the most hard hitting but he gets points for at least attempting.

flow: MV.. dude, creative, we talked about this... u need to find a style and stick with it. u got to, many, comas, in, your, bars which reeeally fuck ur flow up, AND takes away power from ur punches. u had short bars and long bars. stick to ONE style and use it.

creativity: meh.. u both lacked in it. but id prolly give it to MV..

multis: none. you both need more multis, makes ur flow soo much smoother and just sounds better.

overall - i gotta give this vote to MV... his punches/wordplay hit a bit harder..

creative - u lost this cuz of ur flow. u have too many pauses and u incorporate words that need to be left out. i mean, its like u just put random words in the bar that has absolutely NO relation to the punch whatsoever. u need to get the grasp on this battle stuff other wise ur gonna keep losing. check out the vets' battles. adapt to their structure if u must. take notes.

2-1 creative

I Wouldn't Say He Cat Sweeped Me Cuz All My Punches Are Directed 2 His Name. I Appreciate You Analyzing My Drop S.J. & Honestly I Felt I Could Have Done Better As Well. 2-1 Uppin Votes

^^ I'll Discredit Your Vote Until I See Some Input, Can You Explain Why He Took Those Cats Rugged? 2-2

i agree with TOYH this was weak

both disses were soft like pillows

Creative gets personals cause of the various name plays
m v my votes shit.

M. Vario gets flow, not by much but his shit was simple so i flowed well

Creative gets punches even though the punches thrown were feather weight, but to an ultra featherweight they were hard.


vote- creative

yall both need to up your game man
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