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Couldnt Really Think Of A Title Hear, But Fuck It...
And I've Typed This Exactly How I Want Yall To Read It..
So Check it..


The SUN'LL-RISE-WHEN-HEAVEN-LOOSENS So I've WONDERED-WHY-THEY-TEST-THE-MOVEMENT
And Who The FUCK-AM-I?-THE-QUESTION'S-RUTHLESS...A CORUPTED-MIND-FROM-HEAD-CONTUSIONS//
Since I Was ONE-I-TRIED-TA-REP-THE-TRUEST But My FLUSTERED-EYES-ARE-YET-INFLUENCED
By The SUBTLE-LINES-YA-SET-IS-USIN To REBUTTAL-GUYS-THAT-TEND-TA-DO-SHIT//
I TRUSTED-LIFE'S-EXCESSIVE-BLUEPRINT But My STUBBORN-PRIDE'S-A-RESTLESS-NUISANCE
And In TROUBLED-TIMES,-THE-BEST-SOLUTION To JUSTIFY-MY-EXECUTION//
I Could CUSTOMIZE-A-REVOLUTION But My LOVE-FOR-RHYMIN-TENDS-TA-SKEW-IT
The UNDERLYIN-RESOLUTION Is To PUBLICIZE-A-BETTER-MUSIC//
So If I'm BUMPIN-LIVE-AND-FLEX-WIT-WHOO-KID...SUMMON-MY-REGRET-FA-CHOOSIN
The HUSSLE-I'VE-BEEN-SENT-TA-CRUISE-WIT Cuz I Bless Em When They Step UP-TO-MY-INTENSIVE-UNIT//
The UNCOVERED-LIES-ARE-NEXT-TA-USELESS, PLUS-THE-GRIND'LL-STRETCH-IN-UNIONS,
BUT-I'M-HIGH,-AND-CATCH-EXCUSES That Are UNREFINED,-YA-VETS-ARE-PUTRID//
That's ENOUGH-TA-DIE,-BUT-LESS-ABUSIVE Than BUSTIN-NINES-WHEN-TECHS-ARE-SHOOTIN...
And I've CUSSED-THE-SKY-IN-STRESSED-DELUSIONS Since My MOTHER-DIED-AND-HENCE,-I'M-CLUELESS//
So Til I'm MUMMAFIED-AND-LEFT-SECLUDED I've COME-TO-FIND,-THE-NEXT-CONCLUSION
Is That I'm UNDERMINDIN'-ANY-STUDENT Cuz My STUFF'S-DEFINED-BY-CLEVER-CHOOSIN...

...To SUMMARIZE,-I'M-NEVER-LOSIN!!

Blah, Fuck This Its SUMMER-TIME-LETS-GET-TA-BOOZIN!!!



ScottJames
2010.

The structure had me feel like I was tripping
either way this piece was dope as hell man
your multi's are wild, cuz I thought it'd be simple
but it was better then I thought, the whole piece was on point
your style is out there, but still straight forward
nice drop man

thanks for peepin this you two!

The FLOW-HAD-LOTS-OF-MULTIRHYMING
but that's not ALL-WHEN-IT-COMES-DOWN-TO-WRITING
SOME-OF-IT-SEEMS-FORCED-LIKE-THE-SECOND-LINE
but still a DOPER-PIECE-THAN-MOST-HERE-I'VE-READ-TONIGHT

Other than the capitals, I liked this piece. Props.

the capitals fucked me all up scott.... i read this when u first dropped it and thought it was dope exept for the capitalizing... im shure most of us kno..where the emphasis goes.. Dope drop tho... i would like to see it written regularly..id enjoy reading it a lil more

I honestly didn't see that many standout lines. I think what was most impressive is the amount of syllables that you compacted into this verse and still made it lucid. Clearly not everyone can do that and it shows the ability of your brain to juggle lots of words in your head at the same time which is probably one of the secrets to why you're such a good battler.

In general, this was more of a look what I can do piece. And if you ask me, we need more of that, challenging ourselves to play with the language, bend it, stretch it, and sometimes force it to do things it shouldn't be. If you appreciate wordplay at all, then you have to appreciate this a bit.

Would I read 10 of these drops a week? No.

Wicked multies. That fact that you were able to keep that going and it never really got nonsensical is impressive.

thanks bro, appreciate it

It was aiight...but I've seen much better. Stay in the lab and work on the skills. You'll be aiight.

STFU^ Scott That Was Dope, Here's A Line I Like The Most

The UNDERLYIN-RESOLUTION Is To PUBLICIZE-A-BETTER-MUSIC//
So If I'm BUMPIN-LIVE-AND-FLEX-WIT-WHOO-KID...SUMMON-MY-REGRET-FA-CHOOSIN
The HUSSLE-I'VE-BEEN-SENT-TA-CRUISE-WIT Cuz I Bless Em When They Step UP-TO-MY-INTENSIVE-UNIT//
The UNCOVERED-LIES-ARE-NEXT-TA-USELESS, PLUS-THE-GRIND'LL-STRETCH-IN-UNIONS,
BUT-I'M-HIGH,-AND-CATCH-EXCUSES That Are UNREFINED,-YA-VETS-ARE-PUTRID//

hat's ENOUGH-TA-DIE,-BUT-LESS-ABUSIVE Than BUSTIN-NINES-WHEN-TECHS-ARE-SHOOTIN...
And I've CUSSED-THE-SKY-IN-STRESSED-DELUSIONS Since My MOTHER-DIED-AND-HENCE,-I'M-CLUELESS//
So Til I'm MUMMAFIED-AND-LEFT-SECLUDED I've COME-TO-FIND,-THE-NEXT-CONCLUSION

dope shit man, whole verse was cool

no complaints lyric/content-wise. i think the CAPS-AND-DASHES-ARE UNNECESSARY, but keep doing YOU man..i'll stay tuned, for sure.

peace


ABZ