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my fuckin flows ferocious give ya multiple sclorosis//
bitch i'm dope as shootin coke between ur toes so no one notices//
it aint over till it's over kid and it aint fuckin over yet//
so i hope ya don't expect ta see me fuckin sober yet//
i said i hope ya don't expect ta see me fuckin sober yet//
but cha might expect ta see me up on yer television set//
throwin up my fuckin set as if i had a set ta rep//
but i'm white as the pad on which i wrote this motha fuckin shit//
so i jus sit in the lab all day n write these fuckin hits//
like shit i'll cut a motha fucker if ya try ta touch my bitch//
cause i don't believe in guns yeah i jus figure they don't exisit//
now u can catch me wrekin shit with my homeboy bill tha kid//
rollin up another spliff don't nobody cheif like this//
hold tha beat i need a breath or maybe another hit//

Yea I gotta agree, the flow was kinda meh
kinda threw me off, your tryna express anxiety tho'
which made the piece shine a bit, the whole rhyme scheme was elementary tho'
the beginning made me think you were going to get lyrical
but then you took it downhill, I suggest you FOCUS
and maybe you'll give off a more, read me vibe

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