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Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:58 pm
by Munteskue1
House Rules
15 bars
Votes on:
Multis
Nameplay
Wordplay
Enjoyability
Flow
Swagg
Punches

Drop due 12 hours from check-in

-- Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:11 pm --

check...

-- Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:19 pm --

So I was on Illest thinkin "who could battle me and have it be even a test?"
Hm, well Crimson's decent I guess.. I like his re-wording of punches from other cees on the net

Never sleeps, never rests- just goes from site to site poppin off in battle leagues with his text
Just cease and digress! You have the right to remain silent, kid! You're under legal arrest

Cause "Crimson's flow" is like.. well, a crimson flow! -there's no other way for you to hear it kid
You show up once every thirty days, bitch, make bad blood, and your battles are always late. period

HAHA

So bitch, I'll flip this shit from the dome, you ain't gettin your sixth win in a row
You're "out of your place" battlin me like gettin evicted from home

Illest, this kid isn't cold- just a typical bitch to me
I'll end your "5-0 record" quicker than clearing crim-inal histories

This shit here will flip this "cee" - gotta be kidding me, please
Spinners and D's? Only "rims" on this "C" on his signature sheet

I'm sonnin you kid, just ask your mom who your father is
She shoulda swallowed the shit, but she was usin more teeth than a hippopotamus

So quit your pretend hype, ego doesn't fit in ya head right
I'll hit with the left, right, try to give it ya best fight

I admittedly wreck mics- and I'll limit your sex life
When bitches see that I just ran through this kid like a red light

None of your texts tight.. but don't cop the rookie card
I bring the heat to this "wrapper" only to find soft and mushy bars

You got me lookin raw kid you fell from this race
Like a turtle... now I see why everybody wants to put shells in his face

Well that's a shame... I just pretty much made you simply a bitch
How are you mentally fit? What- cause you beat 360 and Quix?! pfttt

ha, slow it down..

I'm sick of this shit- you're mediocre... you ain't good cause you've haven't lost ever
Real quick: Shane carwin had a better record than you till he got dropped by Brock Lesnar

But you must understand ya lame, ya luck is just an abandoned phase
Plus it's a RAP FORUM, FAGGOT... enough of the Anime!!!!

So here, I'll help ya out... 99 cents for Crimson's best devout flows!
But blank CDS are a dollar?... Guess it'd be best if ya kept your mouth closed

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:03 am
by crimson
15 bars??..smh... fine, i'll oblige...


Check.................yaself

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:16 am
by K KiLLaH
thisll be a dope battle

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:52 am
by crimson
iight Def.....15 bars of combat :twisted:

Indefinite wrote:Hide in a cave and right away I spend a night with Bin Laden
Indefinite wrote: Sick Double entendre

^^^^^^^^^^^^

This COWARDS BOLD, but its pretty clear this closet fag is NOW EXPOSED// he loves double entendres
so much, he used one to confess his desire to be in OSAMAS HOLE// :?

He called me out…I accepted, then he disappeared & i LAUGHED PLENTY TOO//
I thought he left the site for good, but LOOK hes back….lol, guess that’s his CATCH-22//

15 bar battle??? They’ll ‘ignore the middle’ & skim through ya filler lines ..wait, its WORST THAN IT SEEMS//
Ya bars’ll turn the whole site to Lupe fans……..all they’ll check for is your 1st & 15th

I’m LAUGHIN AT ‘EM cause he imitates others to make up for what he LACKS IN RAPPIN//
DAmn RIght PiPsqueAk & now ya’ll can decipher whose style hes SWAGGER JACK-IN

yeah,it's plain as black & white, ya unoriginal verse can’t SCRATCH OR PHASE ME//
Cause u just outlining a rapper…..hey!, now ya sketchy bars MATCH YA AVI!!!!


Hes got no crew, his stroke is self induced’ but I DOUBT YOUR SET RIGHT//
Guess it’s a solo affair’ when the ‘matter’s at hand’….but ummm, that’s enough ABOUT YA SEX LIFE//

15 huh??….. that’s how many minutes ya rap career’s got LEFT IN IT//
Cause if it’s a discussion naming the sites nicest texters you’ll never hear DEF IN IT//


I drop LYRICAL GEMS, guess he figures he’ll bore the judges into giving him a MIRACLE WIN//
Hey dumbass, no one wants to read FIVE bars from you, much less an ADDITIONAL TEN// :roll:


Check for my CD …Tracks are fire !!!!!!!!!!! negro please…ENOUGH OF FABLES
only people eagerly waitin for a def jam’ drop are signed to RUSSELS LABEL

My SLICK WIT is like a SWIFT KICK to this NITWIT when I SPIT SCRIPTS// matter fact, I wont dump on ’em….just a QUICK PISS
.......see stupid, u didnt even make my SHIT LIST


I’ve COME TO FIGHT, so ya bell might get RUNG TONIGHT from my 1, 2 STRIKE//
He posted first, but if I tried to “feed off’ THAT weak verse I’d die of a HUNGER STRIKE


EXCUSE THE GAMES but I PROVED YOUR LAME, so your failure is EMINENT, PLEASE//
& I’ll SOON EXPLAIN his USERNAME, ..it means long vacation’ cause his talents on an INDEFINITE LEAVE//


When Crimson’s on the ‘beat’, its excessive force, so every WEEK A NEW CASUALTY//
Im 5-0 so I bet after this beat down’ he’ll be yet another nigga screaming POLICE BRUTALITY!!!//


I’m a GIFT TO THE SITE, he brought played punches and I brought WITS TO THE FIGHT//
So when I say all jokes aside”, means I’m bout to push Def to the left & QUIX TO THE RIGHT


Speaking of which, if u saw how i TORTURED QUIX why didnt you FORFEIT QUICK??//
3 different views, cause y’all call it guts, I call it bluff and after this he’ll CALL IT QUITS!! :lol:

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:55 pm
by JDR
damnnnnnnnnn. That's all I'll say. can't vote cos of that obvious "beef" shit but damn.

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:06 pm
by complexity
That was probably the best battle verse I've read in the battle grounds this year. It was personal, had great punches, witty wordplay, and was original. Not forced either.

Crimson takes this in every category. The idea he came that hard against someone clearly not on his level says a lot about the character of this MC.

I'm impressed, plain and simple. Very noteworthy appearance.

Count my vote if you'd like. Keep elevating Indefinite.

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:19 pm
by NoVeL
SWEEP.. Damn.. For Someone Who's Resumed Their Activity I Agree With Both Emcees Above. You've Casketed Alot of Cats Crim, Cant Sleep On You.

MVGT Crimson

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:19 pm
by DaPrince
Cat sweep for Crimson. I think it's pretty obvious who the superior battler was in this massacre.

v/Crimson

Re: Indefinite vs. crimson

Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:56 am
by JDR
haha. Too bad I don't get to give you ya first L. Crimson juss bodied you homie.