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It's a mistake-to-think Rugged could take-this-win looking like a Super-Trooper,
And incase-you-did, let me say you're straight dreaming like a Martin Luther-Ruler,

Rugged Eros wants to be a God; but he better pray-I-quit before he makes-a-spit,
I prey-on-kids, Make Eros obsolete like I turn this board into a forum for atheists.

I'm raping-him, Rugged couldn't draw a crowd if he was painting a stadium.
When I say-I'll-spit I spit, so don't expect a lazy-win, like that day-with-VIM

And verbatim, against Duke he reused-a-verse. What could be stupider?
Watch this wannabe Cupid-girl get wrapped by a Titan like Jupiter.


I'm the Master of your Universe. HE-MANage to never even have-a-chance.
Like a snowball in hell. I'm dropping like an avalanche while you crap-your-pants.

I'll slap-my-hand and snap-your-stance. You would need heroin to get a dope-hook.
The only way this asshole gets a woman in bed...is a drawing in his notebook.(check his avatar)*
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For reference:

RE vs Duke
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/duke- ... ml#p144400

RE vs VIM
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/rugge ... ml#p140807

Cupid is the Roman equivalent of Eros.

Edit* Rugged has since changed his avatar. It used to be him(presumably) sitting on a bed with a bunch of books and notebooks scattered around him.

If you need any more explanation let me know before you vote. Thanks. Good luck, Rugged.

Kau:

It's a mistake-to-think Rugged could take-this-win looking like a Super-Trooper,
And incase-you-did, let me say you're straight dreaming like a Martin Luther-Ruler

no. terrible opener 1/5

Rugged Eros wants to be a God; but he better pray-I-quit before he makes-a-spit,
I prey-on-kids, Make Eros obsolete like I turn this board into a forum for atheists.

this hardly rhymed for me, didnt like it, atheists punches are played 2/5

I'm raping-him, Rugged couldn't draw a crowd if he was painting a stadium.
When I say-I'll-spit I spit, so don't expect a lazy-win, like that day-with-VIM

good lil personal, still not very hard hitting.. 3/5

And verbatim, against Duke he reused-a-verse. What could be stupider?
Watch this wannabe Cupid-girl get wrapped by a Titan like Jupiter.

ehh, wasnt feelin this 2/5


I'm the Master of your Universe. HE-MANage to never even have-a-chance.
Like a snowball in hell. I'm dropping like an avalanche while you crap-your-pants.

wtf? no. 0/5

I'll slap-my-hand and snap-your-stance. You would need heroin to get a dope-hook.
The only way this asshole gets a woman in bed...is a drawing in his notebook.(check his avatar)*

this doesnt make sense anymore still i remember it, 3.5/5
ur multies need to rhyme better..lotta forced words in there.

overall: 11.5/30


Rugg:

I got no soul-child, I'm so vile, fuck ya profile, I need no bio//
FACT: This Detroit Lion is as good as a stolen whip cuz he's got "NO TITLE"//

not bad. decent opener 3.5/5

Don't even TRIP you aint Special K(au), ya' must been huffing Ketamine//
Wish I could let the "mic judge(Mike Judge)" this Beavis since he wants to Butt-heads w/ me//

this concept is older than jesus.. 1/5

Deaf Shady wouldn't even copy cat, like prison candy: ya bars are just shit//
Get raped in this Oz, Kau's you ain't got the "heart of a lion", you got the heart of a bitch//

prision concepts = no! punch was no hard hitting.. 2/5

Imma Colorado Avalanche, it's a circus how I handle cats//
Kau's a fag who "dash boards" when he loses, watch, cuz $eR!oU$ SK!LL is what this "cat'll lack"//

cat'll lack = played. wasnt feelin this 2/5

I don't even battle rap, your dumb rhymes disappoint, probably never done time in the joint//
This Lion's such a fucking white girl he couldn't even "cut lines" in Detroit//

meh, 2.5/5

Fuck beef, I'll fry em into cooked meat, trying to push me, this lions a pussy//
You got no freestyle, you might wanna go back n' "pick up the pad" like Dez Bryant you rookie// HAHA!

4/5 this was dope.

overall: 15/30

very weak battle. yall needa step it upppp!!! dont come lazy


vote: Rugg

Aight so here's the breakdown...

Rugged's Verse
I got no soul-child, I'm so vile, fuck ya profile, I need no bio//
FACT: This Detroit Lion is as good as a stolen whip cuz he's got "NO TITLE"//

I liked the intro, wordplay, and punch in this one. Nice delivery.

I'd rather get "N(in) FL"

Don't even TRIP you aint Special K(au), ya' must been huffing Ketamine//
Wish I could let the "mic judge(Mike Judge)" this Beavis since he wants to Butt-heads w/ me//

You didnt need the (au) thrown in there, IMO. The punch was still present. The wordplay in the second line was nice for all the references I've seen to B and B over the years.

Deaf Shady wouldn't even copy cat, like prison candy: ya bars are just shit//
Get raped in this Oz, Kau's you ain't got the "heart of a lion", you got the heart of a bitch//

Mediocre compared to what you brought earlier in the verse, but nice nonetheless

Fucking coward...

Imma Colorado Avalanche, it's a circus how I handle cats//
Kau's a fag who "dash boards" when he loses, watch, cuz $eR!oU$ SK!LL is what this "cat'll lack"//

ALright, alright, I'm feeling this one... Couldve played the Avalanche a little more maybe...

I don't even battle rap, your dumb rhymes disappoint, probably never done time in the joint//
This Lion's such a fucking white girl he couldn't even "cut lines" in Detroit//

Eh, the first line was just filler to me, and the punch wasn't quite as hard as I think you could have brought it

Fuck beef, I'll fry em into cooked meat, trying to push me, this lions a pussy//
You got no freestyle, you might wanna go back n' "pick up the pad" like Dez Bryant you rookie// HAHA!

Okay, I'm liking the closer and the use of the multi's. Nice way to round out your verse here...


Kau's Verse
It's a mistake-to-think Rugged could take-this-win looking like a Super-Trooper,
And incase-you-did, let me say you're straight dreaming like a Martin Luther-Ruler,

I like the punchline in this one. Nice way to kick off the verse. Couldve played with the Super Trooper reference more though...

Rugged Eros wants to be a God; but he better pray-I-quit before he makes-a-spit,
I prey-on-kids, Make Eros obsolete like I turn this board into a forum for atheists.

Again a nice punch here. The makes a spit seems forced for the multi though...

I'm raping-him, Rugged couldn't draw a crowd if he was painting a stadium.
When I say-I'll-spit I spit, so don't expect a lazy-win, like that day-with-VIM

This first line was dope. Second line didn't deliver quite as hard...

And verbatim, against Duke he reused-a-verse. What could be stupider?
Watch this wannabe Cupid-girl get wrapped by a Titan like Jupiter.

The punch was nice, but something caught my eye that may not have bothered anyone else... Stupider isn't a word, and it didnt seem like you were mocking him with it, so I'm not sure how to take it...

I'm the Master of your Universe. HE-MANage to never even have-a-chance.
Like a snowball in hell. I'm dropping like an avalanche while you crap-your-pants.

Eh, the wordplay in the first line was stretched, and the second line didn't really stand out at all...

I'll slap-my-hand and snap-your-stance. You would need heroin to get a dope-hook.
The only way this asshole gets a woman in bed...is a drawing in his notebook.(check his avatar)*

This was a nice ending. Great multi's and wordplay followed by a solid punch. Good stuff here.



And my vote goes to... Rugged. Just had an over-all more rounded and consistant verse. Good battle fellas.

I'm raping-him, Rugged couldn't draw a crowd if he was painting a stadium.
When I say-I'll-spit I spit, so don't expect a lazy-win, like that day-with-VIM

VS
Fuck beef, I'll fry em into cooked meat, trying to push me, this lions a pussy//
You got no freestyle, you might wanna go back n' "pick up the pad" like Dez Bryant you rookie// HAHA!


this wasnt much of a contest...seemed Kau struggled to come up with decent punches & personals...neither verses were that good though..



Vote= Rugged