Re: Creative & Catch Vs Kau & TOYH
Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:56 am
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nice use of picHe'll be looking lonely in his avatar after I turn his dame loose
dope line.nice play with Catches name...i ve hear the second line flipped alittle differnt a few time...but still a cool line.Creative you better toss an eagle cuz I'll catch a .22 and burn ya neck,
Earn respect both of you frauds so I already returned ya checks!
set up line was great...i new what was coming in the second one before i read..predictable.I mixed acid and birth control cuz their mothers wanted a trip without kids
But I was out did the rubber popped and look what came out? Shit!
good flow....second was a cool,nice usage of creative.You can make-the-assumption that haters-get-punished.*
And if he matches my flow then I'm Creative-with-punches.
first line was filler, second i can see where u was goin with it, juts didnt hit hard..Unable-to-touch-this, but that meets expectations.
Number 2 is where you're @, i flip like exclamations
best line of your verse IMOAnd, yo, I heard Creative's into assfucking-dudes
So, I guess that's how he finds himself in a Catch22
DOPE next line after that was ehhAnd I ain't subtle with shots...I'm Mr. Dunmore than ya whole city
nice...but i've heard it done a million time homie.ause I thought bitches had nails, but these 2 barely "scratched the surface"
nice line right there good flip on TOYH's nameEncumber ya hype, "lighting you up" with a thundering strike
Just ask ya girl why she's callin me TheOneThatSheLikes
nice lineI'll Leave Both em "Lion"/Lyin' From Da Haymakers in Dis Boxin' Match.
Kau The Liar U Only "Stack Paper" Workin' Depo Jobs At Office Max!
a crow line would of been better cuz i'm pretty sure its pronouced like KAW,if the letter were flipped it would be A COW sound...anyhooDigress From Bull-shit No Need Fa Me To "Wrassle Cows/Kau's"
nice..Here's A Lion Reference.. I Think Simba & Sorry Kau I Realize That'd Be Only Hurtin' Ya "Pride"
Go ahead and throw the book at me I'll burn this lame,
Catch didn't win a Newbery Medal so how'd he earn the name!?*
Nasty Personal ...A Two Piece Here...He'll be looking lonely in his avatar after I turn his dame loose
When a UFC fighter loses it'll definitely hurt ya fame dude**
Nice... Nothing outstanding thoYou can make-the-assumption that haters-get-punished.*
And if he matches my flow then I'm Creative-with-punches.
Good Name Play Here lolAnd, yo, I heard Creative's into assfucking-dudes
So, I guess that's how he finds himself in a Catch22
Nice Lil Word Play...but The Punch Was Weak, No oomph EffectOne from the top, "22" will make 'em stutter and stop,
Cause "lion street," but only when I leave him covered in chalk
Thats Fucking Funny Bro.. Good ShitEncumber ya hype, "lighting you up" with a thundering strike
Just ask ya girl why she's callin me TheOneThatSheLikes
Again Nice Line Here.. But To me It Did not Hit Hard. Just Makes A StatementY'all just steppin-stones-on rough-pavement, here's my clever flows ya love takin'
Ha.. Yezzir, ya know the deal- ~records closed and updated~
Nice Punch... But Line 1 N Two Do Not Support Each Other No Name Play Or Punch In The First Makes It UselessI'll Leave Both em "Lion"/Lyin' From Da Haymakers in Dis Boxin' Match.
Kau The Liar U Only "Stack Paper" Workin' Depo Jobs At Office Max!
Again Dope Ass Second Line.. But The First Was Filler... Dope Second Line ThoMe & Catch Bout Ta Close Caskets, Bury These Cub Bastards, Leave em Wid Dirt in their Eyes.
Here's A Lion Reference.. I Think Simba & Sorry Kau I Realize That'd Be Only Hurtin' Ya "Pride"
This Was A Good Bar..Solid ... But Who Is J Simpson From The Burbs?Yezzir, I'll Leave TheOneYouHate Scarlet in The Face, My Crimson is "Mr. Burns"
Be At Tha Front "Dohh" of His Home-er & I Aint Talkin' J. Simpson From Da Burbs