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Straight Through - Ambition

Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:07 am
by Haz

Re: Straight Through - Ambition

Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:27 am
by - Mutual -
Damm I read That Line That TOYH Pointed Out And Had To Check It Out Dope Man You Did A Great Job On This Straight Spittin Shit, A Smooth Flow And Consistent imo, overall i enjoyed the track had a good old school vibe, keep this shit comin

Re: Straight Through - Ambition

Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:31 am
by Sentus
This was a sick song like they all said. Only problem I had is you didn't really have the slow flow mastered. I couple times it sounded ehh, also your delivery wasn't as clear as it could be. Sometimes you slipped up with that. Other then that though great track

Re: Straight Through - Ambition

Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:26 am
by Kau the Lion
Getting my guitar wrong, music with no strings attached.
I liked that a lot.

Not bad over all. Flow was really squeezed in some places and stretched in others. But your delivery helped to smooth that out.