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Wrote this to the furious anger inst. by Big L

i got no love left for people cuz the demons inside
the system and the scriptured writtens are passin em by
my fire is still burnin but now i got a new drive
instead of changin mentals im workin for my own grind
reality has arrived i realized all the problems
will never disappear, we will never ever solve em
and thats life, hells on earth its a sad sight
but what i can do, im just a rapper who grasps mics
i just tell how it is from my viewpoint
im in the abyss, smokin piff in a few joints
this crude voice will never spark a revolution
only got one choice, and it offers no solution
but dont get me wrong im down for fightin the powers
my mentalities strong i will never be a coward
fall and get devoured by the corporation nation
ill still be rhymin about illumination
but my patience is wearin thin
the devilish grin on faces is makin me, furious within
makin me commit sins but who doesn't nowadays
everybody is a sellout with dreams of gettin paid
im workin for a raise cuz my pops lost his job
to a fucking business who commit mass fraud
and the government is sayin pay more taxes slave
no unemployment checks til your bills are paid
so why you think im full of rage and dont wanna talk
if you're not offering help i say peace and im off
gunna plan thru the dark to bring light thru the door
preparin for the worst cuz i know im rightfully sure
that nobody gives a fuck about my life or yours
thats why you stick with family and friends and you endure

this crude voice will never spark a revolution
only got one choice, and it offers no solution
but dont get me wrong im down for fightin the powers
my mentalities strong i will never be a coward

Its Crazy How u Said u Wont Make A Change But U Will Still Fight The Power...Shows Heart And What Hip Hop Is All About... A Movement In Numbers

everybody is a sellout with dreams of gettin paid
im workin for a raise cuz my pops lost his job
to a fucking business who commit mass fraud
and the government is sayin pay more taxes slave
no unemployment checks til your bills are paid
so why you think im full of rage and dont wanna talk
if you're not offering help i say peace and im off

I Can totally Relate To This... If Worded Better It Would Have Hit Like A Tyson hook To The Chest Bro... But It Lacked Grammatic Flair..

This Was Def A Dope Topic Here... Tho u Undersold Its Impact A Lot... It Does Remind Me Of Why I Write Though... I Need To Get Back To Dropping Pieces Out of Feeling... Cuz This Here i Wanted To Read Even Though It Was not In An Impressive Style.. Cuz In A Way Its Real To Me.. Ups

thanks man, i wasn't too worried about technique that much, even tho i need to in some cases. im going to work on my rhyme schemes a lot more.

im in the abyss, smokin piff in a few joints
this crude voice will never spark a revolution
only got one choice, and it offers no solution
but dont get me wrong im down for fightin the powers
my mentalities strong i will never be a coward
fall and get devoured by the corporation nation
ill still be rhymin about illumination

Solid Piece But Coulda Been Worded Betta.. You Have Potential

and the government is sayin pay more taxes slave
no unemployment checks til your bills are paid
so why you think im full of rage and dont wanna talk
if you're not offering help i say peace and im off

i dug it man

alot of emotion keep it up

AbZ