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1 round

12 lines

and the normal rules.

lets do it homie


i'll be back later 2night to pop it off.


*shakes the rust off*

check

i'm gonna try ta match ya here with the time frame and drop mine tonight..

quick key

I've Mastered ryhmes son, yeah..u dying today
Frying yer brain as u crying in pain
Devour you flesh and leave your eyes on a plate
u wanna ride?? i'ma strangle u with a bicycle chain
not even trying u lame,running full circles round three sixty
yeah i'ma nerd,Abz be nifty, this cats frees iffy
deceased swiftly,make ya disappear like elite gypsies
3 leave twitching when smacked around with with a powerful fist
which is pounding yer ribs, then ya thrown off a mountain or cliff
u the shit?? bitch , i'ma make u drown in my piss..

lol man its been a long time..

good luck homie


AbZ

we'll see how this goes. nice rhyming, but none of them were solid punches or personals

yeah i dont really know anything bout dude 2 get personal

good luck 360

Consider this a hate crime cause I'm beatin' up this fag
and I'll have you thinkin' I'm a fitness trainer the way I'm crunchin' Abz

If this was basketball, all your shots would bounce off the rim, player
so it makes sense your occupation is a fuckin' bricklayer ( http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/profi ... e%20Beast/ )

I listened to your work and I gotta say the lyrics pass par
but you sound like you gargle hot tar.. mixed with glass shards

I have ta eat, so I'll slash this geek with rows of jagged teeth
then with a bloody smirk, ask you peeps.. how the fuck is Abz the beast ?

Who the hell is scared of this geek ? He ain't comparin' ta me
and judgin' by his pic, he has a car bed with Captain America sheets

I'm like a blackjack dealer. I'll hand you a loss, rook
so battling me was the right move.. to get off on the wrong foot

haha dope shit...and no captain america sheets, they are spiderman...haha

Ok Ok ...Abz Had Good Flow From What i See Here... Tho U lacked in Creative metaphores And Word Play Duke...360 Clearly More Elevated With Good Punches and Name Play... Went For The Audio N Threw A Line..Went Hard on The Avatar.. And Name.... So I Would Quote but id just Quote 360's Punches...

Flow... I Think Abz Had The Flow
Punches 360
Personals 360
Creativity 360
Multies.....Abz Had A Few..Tho None Went Any Where So 360

Punches:360
Personals:360
Flow:Abz
Multies:Abz

Both had Great Lines Here, But MVGT 360

Abz You Would Have Won if You Dissed Him More With Direct punches. Ya Style Was Neat Though I Liked It. Keep It Up Man, You Got Potential.

Best Lines

360

Who the hell is scared of this geek ? He ain't comparin' ta me
and judgin' by his pic, he has a car bed with Captain America sheets

AbZ

Devour your flesh and leave your eyes on a plate
u wanna ride?? i'ma strangle u with a bicycle chain

WTF, I thought I already voted on this. Maybe I forgot to submit...

Anyway, I gave this to 360 for the harder hitting punches and personals using the avatar and name. Abz had a better flow but wasn't hitting as hard. Abz on the multies, too. Good shit from both.

Captain America line was my overall favorite.

3-0 TKO...good battle homie

Abz:


I've Mastered ryhmes son, yeah..u dying today
Frying yer brain as u crying in pain
Ok wordplay but no direct punch...3/10
Devour you flesh and leave your eyes on a plate
u wanna ride?? i'ma strangle u with a bicycle chain
Again wordplay is there but no punch...3/10
not even trying u lame,running full circles round three sixty
yeah i'ma nerd,Abz be nifty, this cats frees iffy
Na...2/10
deceased swiftly,make ya disappear like elite gypsies
3 leave twitching when smacked around with with a powerful fist
Nope...2/10
which is pounding yer ribs, then ya thrown off a mountain or cliff
u the shit?? bitch , i'ma make u drown in my piss..
best line id say....6/10


16/50






360:


Consider this a hate crime cause I'm beatin' up this fag
and I'll have you thinkin' I'm a fitness trainer the way I'm crunchin' Abz
Weak opener but more direct then abz whole verse...6/10

If this was basketball, all your shots would bounce off the rim, player
so it makes sense your occupation is a fuckin' bricklayer ( profile/AbZ%20The%20Beast/ )
Ok....4/10

I listened to your work and I gotta say the lyrics pass par
but you sound like you gargle hot tar.. mixed with glass shards
OK personal....7/10

I have ta eat, so I'll slash this geek with rows of jagged teeth
then with a bloody smirk, ask you peeps.. how the fuck is Abz the beast ?
Ok line nothin great...4/10

Who the hell is scared of this geek ? He ain't comparin' ta me
and judgin' by his pic, he has a car bed with Captain America sheets
Lol...Corny ass line but funny....4/10

I'm like a blackjack dealer. I'll hand you a loss, rook
so battling me was the right move.. to get off on the wrong foot
Ok closer....7/10


32/60



Overall this battle was one sided...360 just delivered more of a "battle verse" id say he had some punches in there nuttin special but they were there and Abz got some wordplay but it failed to deliver direct punchlines and trust me i had to learn the hard way with that also.....so my vote goes to....




V/360





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