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been laggin on the audio. but heres sumtn i layed this morning. enjoy

Loved the hook, I don't know if you did it but it was great. Verses were pretty good too, good shit.

"could of drown in her tears"
dope

diamond in ruff, nice section..

''on a mission,impossible at times''
sick

delivery is polished..

dope track...i've wanted 2 use that sample..


good shit homie

the intro is hot...is that the hook?.... DOPE... I Like The Slow Flow Here And It Does Sound Madd Polished.... I Couldve Drown In All The Tears I Made Her Cry...I Ran From Jail Bar Was Hot.... Diamond In The Ruff..Line Is Hot... What Else To Say Bro? ....With All This Material u Should Be Signed... The Lessons im Learning Are Crucial To Survival... Thats Hot... Impossible At Times but keep Shining...And My Shit Keeps Blinding.... U Write Some Good Shit Bro... The Beat So Damn Sick Too...Unless They Family I Aint Fucking With U Hoe!!! LOL I Feel That... U In The Dust If U Choosing to Drop... lol.. The Man In The Mirror Is Me..>So How U Doing Bitch!....Dam.... Dope Heartfelt Track Bro... Keep Amazing Them Loon... This Is Hot

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Ay thanks alot fellas. Im tryna focus on more of my solo shit but i find it hard sometimes to keep the verses relevent to each other. So i put alotta thought into this one. Ill get around to yall wen i get to sum speakers. Good lookin out fellas.

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dope.

this was hot shit, quality dope as usual, the lyrics were straight from the heart type of shit, the flow was nice as hell and the expressions it was feeling filled so dope Track Loon you should be signed up, keep this shit coming man

man if u drop more solo's send them my way dawg wtf I could've been bumpin' dis in Cali haha dope shit dawg liked how u ended da last verse homie very sick haha keep doin' more solo's dawg I'm waitin' on dat Loon E Lou shit haha

Hell yeah! This is great. The concept is ill. The flow is smooth. The rhythm is right on. The 'hook' is dope. The lyrics are tight. I wish I had some sort of constructive criticism to give you, but this shit is hot as hell, I don't got any advice for it. All I know is I'm gonna check out some more of what you got.