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7 Bars? Enjoy.

When I step in? I'll crunch and maim verses, Then use my fists to crush his brain nerves in//
Cause when I come to clean house and 'walk over Rug' it's not a fuckin made service!~//

I'll show you how it is taking life in a sentence, When I put this fucking spike in your linens//
And send body blows while you couldn't bring 'punches with bars' if you were fighting in prison!~//

Lock has got your chest bashed with your inner soul, The crowd sees that your text's lacking the centerfold//
Hell, You could have came with gold mines and I still would have 'paid you no mind' like extracting a mineral!~//

It's easy to notice that you fail to impress, You could be 'ahead' and would barely progress//
Cause I ain't talkin safe in a hole when I put them shells to your chest!~//

Dawg, you sure you wanna text with the vicious?, Lock'll be quick to lace your neck with some stitches//
Cause I'm comin hot off the top, and I'll leave you 'rolled in a blanket' like some mexican dishes!~//

I can't believe this dude scripted up something, And thought it was sick and what's coming?//
Nothing, cause this dude couldn't bring 'punch lines' robbing kids for lunch money!~//

So how the fuck do you say this kid is the best at rappin?, When I ripped in his text with axe tips//
Now I've got you head over 'heels' for me when I twisted your neck and snapped it!~//

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Rolled in a blanket - Burrito, Beef wrapped in a tortilla.

Barely Progress;Safe in a hole - Turtles move slow and feel protected inside of their shell.

Rest should be self explanatory.

rugg:

I'll rape ya words so bad ya'll never talk the same, ya drops are lame, I'll boss ya game//
I'm hall of fame, you might be Masterlock, but my Key's "off the chain"//

3/5. cool play, wasnt really a punch though, more of a self hype

I'm hitting Masterlock w/ so many combination's his face is scarred, my play is hard//
I should be placed w/ stars, you're lucky ya 17 cuz these votes are gonna be "Rated-R(ugged)"//

3/5 - i kinda liked this

Die young just to live it after, kick ya ass, have ya flipping backwards//
Spitting "bad words", curfew's the only the time you'll ever see a "Ticket-Master"//

i dont get it..2.5/5 ill play even on this.

I bet ya on the computer in ya mom's kitchen, trash's only place ya should drop writtens//
Grown man shit, stop kidding, I'll have Plex face fuck you, call it "lock picking"//

no. 1/5

I'll WALK UP to ya HOME w/ a bat & smash ya bars if ya acting hard//
Never catch a charge, cuz I don't need to gamble my life away just to pull "Master's Card"//

2/5 kinda weak

You're Hallmark faggot, a puppet, Master... I'm Mile High bitch, my rocks can roll in Denver//
Fuck guns, gay porn shoots only time you'll hear the words "LOCK & LOAD" together//

lol 2/5 funny, but too soft, come one dude, bring some heattt

You're wet mud, watch me stomp a hole in him w/ nothin' but some Dungaree's n' sandals//
You can't handle the king of this castle, ONLY 17? did your parents sign off for you to be in this battle?**//

too wordy, 2/5
total: 13/35



master:

When I step in? I'll crunch and maim verses, Then use my fists to crush his brain nerves in//
Cause when I come to clean house and 'walk over Rug' it's not a fuckin made service!~//

(*maid) okay nameplay, 3.5/5

I'll show you how it is taking life in a sentence, When I put this fucking spike in your linens//
And send body blows while you couldn't bring 'punches with bars' if you were fighting in prison!~//

wow, another prision punch, 0/5

Lock has got your chest bashed with your inner soul, The crowd sees that your text's lacking the centerfold//
Hell, You could have came with gold mines and I still would have 'paid you no mind' like extracting a mineral!~//

flow + multis + punch = 4/5, dope bar right here!

It's easy to notice that you fail to impress, You could be 'ahead' and would barely progress//
Cause I ain't talkin safe in a hole when I put them shells to your chest!~//

wow this was way too complex/stretched, 1/5

Dawg, you sure you wanna text with the vicious?, Lock'll be quick to lace your neck with some stitches//
Cause I'm comin hot off the top, and I'll leave you 'rolled in a blanket' like some mexican dishes!~//

rolled inna blanket? that jus sounds gay rather than a diss.. 2/5

I can't believe this dude scripted up something, And thought it was sick and what's coming?//
Nothing, cause this dude couldn't bring 'punch lines' robbing kids for lunch money!~//

bro this concept is so fucking old. 0/5

So how the fuck do you say this kid is the best at rappin?, When I ripped in his text with axe tips//
Now I've got you head over 'heels' for me when I twisted your neck and snapped it!~//

played concept but u did ur thing on it 2/5
total: 12.5


overall vote: rugg, barely... master is a better battler i can tell but he had some played concepts which really fucked him in this battle.