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Whose 20 yardline r u on? Jus thot id ask

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nice topic

check check

i got one more artist coming in the studio,he only paid for 2 hours.
i'll whip this up As soon as i finish up here

Clocks Ticking,Beaten and bloody,Non-Stop Hitting
huddle up,hear gods wisdom,just gained a dominant postion
Johnny Knox isnt missing,HIke!!Perfect Arch is thrown
Heart is goin,"he slipped in the mudd"!target is blown
Think Hard and i roll, right into a fleet of vikings
"Damn"!Cant bleive my timing,Sackd! On my knees im dying
Must keep on trying,no pass its in the hands of matt forte
Ready to snap its a horse race only have three more plays
Audible!! Abort,k? "on both sides i'm detecting a blitz"
defensemen are pissed,thread the needle,earl bennet is hit
Ten,then the six,another step we win,"HES BEEN STRIPPED"
By NUmber fifty six,DAMN EJ henderson is quick
"IT CANT END LIKE THIS!" Big fucker, weaved and dodge
Olsen grabbed his knees but lost, got beat and tossed.
I cant believe this oh god,out of nowhere hester appears!!
STRIPPED THE FUCKING BALL, hes running like the best of his years!

TOUCHDOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i seen into the future, watch thhis play out when we face the vikes...

hahaha...


DOPE VERSE RUGG!!

-- Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:21 am --

Go bears

Rugged

Hope the receiver's open & ya don't miss him, fuck a hail mary, no christian//

Cant Do A Hail Mary From the Twenty In The Red Zone Bro.....Unless I Got it Wrong..Dope Line Tho Lol

Come in for the slant"... hope every word got to em, DAMNIT ya not losing//
Like the ball we're down but not out, that's why the clocks moving**//

Best Bar Written Here, I Think In Relation to Word Play..

Heads down, eyes up, like John Elway you got "The Drive" to win this***//
Passes it, Plex catches it, the ref's hands reach to the sky, it's finished...//

Descent

AbZ

Johnny Knox isnt missing,HIke!!Perfect Arch is thrown
Heart is goin,"he slipped in the mudd"!target is blown
Think Hard and i roll, right into a fleet of vikings
"Damn"!Cant bleive my timing,Sackd! On my knees im dying

good imagery Nice Flow

defensemen are pissed,thread the needle,earl bennet is hit
Ten,then the six,another step we win,"HES BEEN STRIPPED"
By NUmber fifty six,DAMN EJ henderson is quick
"IT CANT END LIKE THIS!" Big fucker, weaved and dodge
Olsen grabbed his knees but lost, got beat and tossed.
I cant believe this oh god,out of nowhere hester appears!!
STRIPPED THE FUCKING BALL, hes running like the best of his years!

And Here I See The Difference maker.. U Used A Team And Mentioned Players In Theyre Respective Positions And Made It happen All The Way Down TO Hester With A Crazy Ass Play

With That Being Said I Dont Know If I Should Metion More...Rugged Had Some Nice Word Play And Good Sense...But The Only Thing Is That U Used Illest members Instead Of Real Players... I Know u Used Elway And To Go Back And Figure Out Players Names We Would Have A Hard Time Remembering Could Be Tedius, It Makes A Difference.
I Think U Wouldve Took It If U Used orton And Theyre Well Known Players I Wouldve Been More Familiarized With More Visual,,, I Dont Know What Plex Looks Like.... This Was Nonetheless A Dope Topical Battle And I Want To See This Develop.. I Think It Brings Out Certain Skillz In People That Are Good For Development...


Dope..... V- AbZ

1-0 thnx

man i hope we can get a topical tourney going, text wise and audio.

Think Hard and i roll, right into a fleet of vikings
"Damn"!Cant bleive my timing,Sackd! On my knees im dying

good execution.

defensemen are pissed,thread the needle,earl bennet is hit
Ten,then the six,another step we win,"HES BEEN STRIPPED"
By NUmber fifty six,DAMN EJ henderson is quick
"IT CANT END LIKE THIS!" Big fucker, weaved and dodge
Olsen grabbed his knees but lost, got beat and tossed.
I cant believe this oh god,out of nowhere hester appears!!
STRIPPED THE FUCKING BALL, hes running like the best of his years!

sick with multis and and name dropping

-- Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:21 pm --

woops didnt vote.

Dirt & skin, it's been a "battle of the lines" since opening kickoff//
Must be running uphill, cuz after a "long hike" the QB gets ROCKED!//

that was filthy wordplay. you definitely take wordplay

But overall with flow, execution, multis, etc. abz gets it

MVGT Abz the Beast

thnx for the read and vote

Right on, this is the type of shit I like to see when I come to a new site and start checking out some battles. First off I would like to say that I think this is very close, and I was surprised to see how you both opened this in similar fashion, as far as the structure and approach went. I liked the wordplay in both verses, but this is were Abz seemed to seperate himself just a little and steal the show. This definitely deserves a re-match though, as I think it could very well go the other way around next time. Props to both participants. Hope to see the re-match, fellas.

-Edit here-
Sorry, just in case my vote wasnt clear...
Vote- Abz