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(... Ive ever seen on the net when it comes to battling. I posted a verse against another cat [whom asked me to be in his crew after reading my verse], and was told by many people that they didnt vote for me because I didnt use caps and quotations. They said by not using them, I looked like a newb and people 'dont want to read battles in lower case letters'. Well, if no one here minds to give their opinion, I'm going to post both verses here and see what this site has to say about it.)

Murk McNasty's Verse
This dude thinks he's a star, but I'm shinin and spittin fire like I was birthed on the sun/
The shit be hurtin my gums, flame be burnin my lungs/ Duck's in the wrong lake, even his boy hit his back with a long shank/
I'd get more of a laugh by lookin at him or listening to one of them old ass Cheech and Chong tapes/
I bomb greats, so I'm just settin off fireworks for this one/
Lol Im tired and he's been done, God, I'm much more inspired by how my dick's hung/
Look at this faggot with Mike in his hand like he was at Neverland with Bubbles/
Jackson, damn it man, he loves you... Supporter? He won't just fan it man, he'll blow you/
Goro doesnt bare more arms than me, read my verse and he'll "GOD DAMN!!" me/
Knowing defeat like the Boston C's, he shouldnt often speak, the purpose of his living is completely lost to me/


Kwon's Verse
Dudes that TALK-STUFF.. I’ll have them HAWKED-“UP” like KIDS-IN-THE-GAME-SON/sun!! (sun vs. hawks, nba.. Sun is “up” in the sky)
when I’m FUCKIN-ROUND-WIT-“TEC’S” ’fuck-sports’ but you’ll be sprintin ’up-court’ so your RUNNIN-OUT-OF-BREATH like SHINS-IN-YOUR-DANG-LUNGS!!
Think your team is ALL-TOUGH till them gunz make em ALL-GUST (August) Like WINDS-IN-THE-EIGHTH-MONTH!!
Just Challenge I don’t know why you post OPENS-FOR.. Cuz Your PUNCHES all FRONT like an OCEAN-SHORE!!
I have no clue why you think this is a GAME-FOR I’ll put my COCK-IN-YA-MAIN-WHORE!!
You think you GOIN-OFF well this is me GOIN-SOFT like WATCHIN-A-GAY-PORN!!
I’m Reppin “KiiDD”, plus I’m just like “Sid” wit TOYS-N-STUFF (Toy Story)
Be A SNAKE, Then I’ll pop the EIGHT til you COIL-UP!!

Dont get it twisted, I know duke has some nice lines and shit, but for a few heads to say they voted against me for the above reasons... It made me want to puke.

Nigga said " sun is up in the sky".....I woulda disqualified him just for saying that

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Okay, so I put this up to see about some feedback, and nothing. Disappointing. Then I have someone whom I havent even seen a post up on this site yet telling me he will beef with me. Lol.
That should be handled in the proper thread and forum, buddy.
If no one is going to give feedback, but rather just look at the words, then what's the point of even having the forum to drop shit in? Now Im beginning to see why this site hasn't blown up to the full capacity, or at least a respectable regular cast, that it has the potential for.
Thanks to anyone that actually read the shit I posted and at least critiqued it mentally. Its appreciated.

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Thanks. That's the best feed that I've received on this piece yet! Lmfao.

Personally I Think This Was A Weak Battle... Fuck It I Read it Earlier While I Was At Work...It Does Seem The Caps Had An Effect on The Way Dumb Asses Read Things.... Tho i Saw no No Personals And Doubt This Was A Succesful Battle To Even Vote On If U Were both Respected Players In That Respective Field....So From My Perspective I Come Up With The Given Conclusion That Crimson Was Amused At This Supposed Battle

No Hate...Just The Feed u Asked For Bro...