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Due Friday at 5:00pm pacific standard...8:00 eastern, quix :/


G/L

i should be able to post when i reach home tongiht!


G'Luck

Fuck the pre-talk



Face it, your garbage!
i'm far better wid JOKES AND LETTERS, BRO; you'll read mah verse and CHOKE, N NEVER SHOW!
i hope theres truth to your sig, cuz if 'you coming back in the winter' i sure HOPE IT NEVER SNOWS

you can't DEFEND MAH GADGETS, I'm a Kill Catch22 watch them DESCEND HIS CASKET
Watch me 'Bring this mack up' and 'String his ass up' like a TENNIS RACKET

you go to mail strip clubs just tah LOOK FOR FAVORS; you gonna serve me?? ... watch me COOK THE WAITER
Battling Quix IS gonan be your 'Down-fall' ... cuz you 'stay around Balls' more than SNOOKER PLAYERS

this fag ain't hood, all he DO-IS TALK, flapping his gums, while i stay spitting these RUTHLESS DROPS
no one here 'believes your nice' cuz you a puppy ... wid A 'weaker bite' than a TOOTHLESS DOG

every battle i see you in, you seem to loose ... and this GUY SAYS HE MACKING-DAMES?
yoh pic look photoshoped ... so watch me 'Brake yah lines apart' like HIGHWAY PASSING LANES

your a fool main, compared tah me you got NO CLOUT AND HAVE HALF THE HEART
i could go easy on yah bitch ass ... cuz yah girl 'fucked me on the very COUCH' IN YAH AVATAR

Fall Back Kid ... Its murder!

big text for you, quix... big text


leave the site, you won't be EVER-LOVED-OR-MISSED..

cause kid you NEVER-FUCKIN-QUIT with your TEXTS-THAT-SUCK-N-SHIT//
go read a book learn how to rap and get your SENTENCE-STRUCTURE-FIXED

okay, PLEASE... IS-HE-JOKING???

no NEED-TO-BE-QUOTING, y'all know he only gives the site BEEF-AND-WEAK-FLOWING
i know you a broke ass dude always hyped bout "ambition" "FEED"-AND-"FREE"-POSTING...

any need for ME-TO-KEEP-GOING?

lol..

so how's the LIFE-WITH-DAD-AND-MOM? know you either on this SITE-OR-JACKIN-OFF
clickin a LIKE-MY-STATUS-BOX.. or more than likely you there again TYPIN-FAGGOT-DROPS..
safe to say i can "blame it on ya HYPE-OR-SWAGGER-DOGG!"

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/blame ... 17792.html

so when i LIGHT-THE-STATIC-SHOCK you'll take FLIGHT-OR-SCATTER-OFF
why FIGHT-WITH-BATTLE-TALK? so you can put a real rapper in your avy and WRITE-WITH-CAMOUFLAGE?

cause bitch i'm MORBID-AND-OBSCENE just fuckin w/ ya head like PORNO-IN-YA-DREAMS
you can't touch me, you'll get dropped like the X in the CORNER-OF-THE-SCREEN

i'll make you STUTTER-WAIT...SCREAM- cause ya days are NUMBERED-LATELY
but not number #56, i'ma go join the OTHER-EIGHTEEN

(peep quix's record)

i'm far better wid JOKES AND LETTERS, BRO; you'll read mah verse and CHOKE, N NEVER SHOW!
i hope theres truth to your sig, cuz if 'you coming back in the winter' i sure HOPE IT NEVER SNOWS

Decent personal with some good multies. Lacked wordplay, though, and the flow was a bit choppy. 3/5

you can't DEFEND MAH GADGETS, I'm a Kill Catch22 watch them DESCEND HIS CASKET
Watch me 'Bring this mack up' and 'String his ass up' like a TENNIS RACKET

Weak punch. Played concept. 2/5

you go to mail strip clubs just tah LOOK FOR FAVORS; you gonna serve me?? ... watch me COOK THE WAITER
Battling Quix IS gonan be your 'Down-fall' ... cuz you 'stay around Balls' more than SNOOKER PLAYERS

I think you mean "male" not "mail". Another weak bar. Flowed better than the rest, at least and had a semblance of wordplay. 3/5

this fag ain't hood, all he DO-IS TALK, flapping his gums, while i stay spitting these RUTHLESS DROPS
no one here 'believes your nice' cuz you a puppy ... wid A 'weaker bite' than a TOOTHLESS DOG

Meh. 3/5

every battle i see you in, you seem to loose ... and this GUY SAYS HE MACKING-DAMES?
yoh pic look photoshoped ... so watch me 'Brake yah lines apart' like HIGHWAY PASSING LANES

Finally, some wordplay! The whole bar lacked cohesion, though. 3/5 (P.S. "lose" not "loose")

your a fool main, compared tah me you got NO CLOUT AND HAVE HALF THE HEART
i could go easy on yah bitch ass ... cuz yah girl 'fucked me on the very COUCH' IN YAH AVATAR

A personal that flowed ok but not much else. 3/5

17/30
Over all a mediocre verse. Lacked wordplay and personals through out.

leave the site, you won't be EVER-LOVED-OR-MISSED..

cause kid you NEVER-FUCKIN-QUIT with your TEXTS-THAT-SUCK-N-SHIT//
go read a book learn how to rap and get your SENTENCE-STRUCTURE-FIXED

Nothing special here. 2/5

okay, PLEASE... IS-HE-JOKING???

no NEED-TO-BE-QUOTING, y'all know he only gives the site BEEF-AND-WEAK-FLOWING
i know you a broke ass dude always hyped bout "ambition" "FEED"-AND-"FREE"-POSTING...

any need for ME-TO-KEEP-GOING?

More like a bar and a half but had a decent personal and some wordplay. 4/5

so how's the LIFE-WITH-DAD-AND-MOM? know you either on this SITE-OR-JACKIN-OFF
clickin a LIKE-MY-STATUS-BOX.. or more than likely you there again TYPIN-FAGGOT-DROPS..
safe to say i can "blame it on ya HYPE-OR-SWAGGER-DOGG!"

Another good personal and another loooong bar. 4/5

so when i LIGHT-THE-STATIC-SHOCK you'll take FLIGHT-OR-SCATTER-OFF
why FIGHT-WITH-BATTLE-TALK? so you can put a real rapper in your avy and WRITE-WITH-CAMOUFLAGE?

Flow was stretched in the second line. Not really punching hard at all. 2/5

cause bitch i'm MORBID-AND-OBSCENE just fuckin w/ ya head like PORNO-IN-YA-DREAMS
you can't touch me, you'll get dropped like the X in the CORNER-OF-THE-SCREEN

Wordplay in both lines and good flow/multies on this bar. Lacked personals, though.4/5

i'll make you STUTTER-WAIT...SCREAM- cause ya days are NUMBERED-LATELY
but not number #56, i'ma go join the OTHER-EIGHTEEN

Decent personal but the flow flet way off, especially compared to stretched bars earlier in your verse. 3/5

19/30

I liked the personals and wordplay here but it was brought down by a weak flow.

As a side note, I really hate the over formatting used in this battle. it makes it hard to read and feel the flow the first time through. I had to re-read both verses to really stop noticing it. But as far as voting goes it was a moot point since they both did it.

Anyway, I feel catch edged it out with harder punches. Kind of a so-so battle over all.

+1 Catch22

1-0 uppin

i'm far better wid JOKES AND LETTERS, BRO; you'll read mah verse and CHOKE, N NEVER SHOW!
i hope theres truth to your sig, cuz if 'you coming back in the winter' i sure HOPE IT NEVER SNOWS

5/5 LMAO

you can't DEFEND MAH GADGETS, I'm a Kill Catch22 watch them DESCEND HIS CASKET
Watch me 'Bring this mack up' and 'String his ass up' like a TENNIS RACKET

3/5 for wordplay.. whack otherwise

you go to mail strip clubs just tah LOOK FOR FAVORS; you gonna serve me?? ... watch me COOK THE WAITER
Battling Quix IS gonan be your 'Down-fall' ... cuz you 'stay around Balls' more than SNOOKER PLAYERS

1/5 Lame ass line.

this fag ain't hood, all he DO-IS TALK, flapping his gums, while i stay spitting these RUTHLESS DROPS
no one here 'believes your nice' cuz you a puppy ... wid A 'weaker bite' than a TOOTHLESS DOG

4/5 Nice! There ya go.

every battle i see you in, you seem to loose ... and this GUY SAYS HE MACKING-DAMES?
yoh pic look photoshoped ... so watch me 'Brake yah lines apart' like HIGHWAY PASSING LANES

3.5/5 cool wordplay

your a fool main, compared tah me you got NO CLOUT AND HAVE HALF THE HEART
i could go easy on yah bitch ass ... cuz yah girl 'fucked me on the very COUCH' IN YAH AVATAR

1/5 didn't flow or rhyme very well and really... Another fucking your bitch line?

17.5/30

cause kid you NEVER-FUCKIN-QUIT with your TEXTS-THAT-SUCK-N-SHIT//
go read a book learn how to rap and get your SENTENCE-STRUCTURE-FIXED

2/5 Weak..

okay, PLEASE... IS-HE-JOKING???

no NEED-TO-BE-QUOTING, y'all know he only gives the site BEEF-AND-WEAK-FLOWING
i know you a broke ass dude always hyped bout "ambition" "FEED"-AND-"FREE"-POSTING...

4.5/5 Hilarious wordplay

so how's the LIFE-WITH-DAD-AND-MOM? know you either on this SITE-OR-JACKIN-OFF
clickin a LIKE-MY-STATUS-BOX.. or more than likely you there again TYPIN-FAGGOT-DROPS..
safe to say i can "blame it on ya HYPE-OR-SWAGGER-DOGG!"

blame-mah-swagger-vt17792.html

4.5/5 Started off slow, picking up!

so when i LIGHT-THE-STATIC-SHOCK you'll take FLIGHT-OR-SCATTER-OFF
why FIGHT-WITH-BATTLE-TALK? so you can put a real rapper in your avy and WRITE-WITH-CAMOUFLAGE?

2.5/5 Hm. I guess.

cause bitch i'm MORBID-AND-OBSCENE just fuckin w/ ya head like PORNO-IN-YA-DREAMS
you can't touch me, you'll get dropped like the X in the CORNER-OF-THE-SCREEN

3.5/5 Nice play again, otherwise nothing hard.

i'll make you STUTTER-WAIT...SCREAM- cause ya days are NUMBERED-LATELY
but not number #56, i'ma go join the OTHER-EIGHTEEN

1.5/5 Not really feeling it

18.5/30

Decent/Mediocre battle.

MVGT Catch

2-0 uppin!!!

i'm far better wid JOKES AND LETTERS, BRO; you'll read mah verse and CHOKE, N NEVER SHOW!
i hope theres truth to your sig, cuz if 'you coming back in the winter' i sure HOPE IT NEVER SNOWS

decent opener thought it flowed well.

Watch me 'Bring this mack up' and 'String his ass up' like a TENNIS RACKET

seen it done differently alot of times.

no one here 'believes your nice' cuz you a puppy ... wid A 'weaker bite' than a TOOTHLESS DOG

dope

over all had some cool lines here and there..
but wasnt feeling it that much.

go read a book learn how to rap and get your SENTENCE-STRUCTURE-FIXED

i like this.

so how's the LIFE-WITH-DAD-AND-MOM? know you either on this SITE-OR-JACKIN-OFF
clickin a LIKE-MY-STATUS-BOX.. or more than likely you there again TYPIN-FAGGOT-DROPS..
safe to say i can "blame it on ya HYPE-OR-SWAGGER-DOGG!"

dope.

why FIGHT-WITH-BATTLE-TALK? so you can put a real rapper in your avy and WRITE-WITH-CAMOUFLAGE

my fav line of yours.

i'll make you STUTTER-WAIT...SCREAM- cause ya days are NUMBERED-LATELY
but not number #56, i'ma go join the OTHER-EIGHTEEN

cool ending.

Over all solid verse had some good wordplay and solid flow

vote Catch ( by a small margin)
very close battle guys goos shit

AbZ

Because a lot of newbs voted on this battle. I'm removing the KO and its the first to five votes.

Here's the breakdown

Quix's verse
Face it, your garbage!
i'm far better wid JOKES AND LETTERS, BRO; you'll read mah verse and CHOKE, N NEVER SHOW!
i hope theres truth to your sig, cuz if 'you coming back in the winter' i sure HOPE IT NEVER SNOWS

Okay the opener was alright but nothing hard really. The first line isnt even relavent because he did in fact show. The wordplay is kinda weak. Punch is ehh...

you can't DEFEND MAH GADGETS, I'm a Kill Catch22 watch them DESCEND HIS CASKET
Watch me 'Bring this mack up' and 'String his ass up' like a TENNIS RACKET

Multi's are good. Your flow is on point, no doubt, but the first line is really just filler. You're not really coming at him, you're just talking ya know? The second line has some wordplay but the punch isnt hard really. You gotta come with some damn did he just say that? type shit.

you go to mail strip clubs just tah LOOK FOR FAVORS; you gonna serve me?? ... watch me COOK THE WAITER
Battling Quix IS gonan be your 'Down-fall' ... cuz you 'stay around Balls' more than SNOOKER PLAYERS

once again, multi's are there, but not alot else.

this fag ain't hood, all he DO-IS TALK, flapping his gums, while i stay spitting these RUTHLESS DROPS
no one here 'believes your nice' cuz you a puppy ... wid A 'weaker bite' than a TOOTHLESS DOG

Okay, the first line is a decent set up, really. I like how that came together. The punch is on point too. Not hard but its more what you should be aiming at when you're battling someone.

every battle i see you in, you seem to loose ... and this GUY SAYS HE MACKING-DAMES?
yoh pic look photoshoped ... so watch me 'Brake yah lines apart' like HIGHWAY PASSING LANES

Lsing battles and macking dames dont reference each other. Thats how you want your set up to roll, building into the wordplay for your bar, you feel me? This doesnt do that. The punch is better than the beginning. YOu couldve built this into something nasty though.

your a fool main, compared tah me you got NO CLOUT AND HAVE HALF THE HEART
i could go easy on yah bitch ass ... cuz yah girl 'fucked me on the very COUCH' IN YAH AVATAR

Eh, bitch and momma disses don't really do anything for me unless its a personal that is real sick, like dudes girl having herpes or something shit and you can prove its true. To me, punches like that dont really go at the emcee. You have some work to do with battle verses, but you have the right idea, that's for sure. Just gotta tweak some shit and you'll be hittin em hard.


Catch22's verse
leave the site, you won't be EVER-LOVED-OR-MISSED..

cause kid you NEVER-FUCKIN-QUIT with your TEXTS-THAT-SUCK-N-SHIT//
go read a book learn how to rap and get your SENTENCE-STRUCTURE-FIXED

Eh, an alright opener, but dudes flow is pretty on point really, so this doesnt hit hard for me.

okay, PLEASE... IS-HE-JOKING???

no NEED-TO-BE-QUOTING, y'all know he only gives the site BEEF-AND-WEAK-FLOWING
i know you a broke ass dude always hyped bout "ambition" "FEED"-AND-"FREE"-POSTING...

any need for ME-TO-KEEP-GOING?

This is alright too, but doesnt crack his head like I want to see. Im wanting to hear you guys spill each others guts, ya know?

lol..

so how's the LIFE-WITH-DAD-AND-MOM? know you either on this SITE-OR-JACKIN-OFF
clickin a LIKE-MY-STATUS-BOX.. or more than likely you there again TYPIN-FAGGOT-DROPS..
safe to say i can "blame it on ya HYPE-OR-SWAGGER-DOGG!"

This is a little more like it, the first line made me laugh a little, but not delivering like I expect

blame-mah-swagger-vt17792.html

so when i LIGHT-THE-STATIC-SHOCK you'll take FLIGHT-OR-SCATTER-OFF
why FIGHT-WITH-BATTLE-TALK? so you can put a real rapper in your avy and WRITE-WITH-CAMOUFLAGE?

This is definitely getting there. Nice.

cause bitch i'm MORBID-AND-OBSCENE just fuckin w/ ya head like PORNO-IN-YA-DREAMS
you can't touch me, you'll get dropped like the X in the CORNER-OF-THE-SCREEN

Ahahaha @ the first line, nice punch but I've seen it flipped better.

i'll make you STUTTER-WAIT...SCREAM- cause ya days are NUMBERED-LATELY
but not number #56, i'ma go join the OTHER-EIGHTEEN

This is a personal at the record, but it doesnt deliver like you probably wanted it to. You could definitely work on how you deliver your punchlines more, but you're a step above Quix in this department IMO.


Vote - Catch22, just for having slightly harder punches. This battle could have gone much harder with the concepts that were brought up, and better works with wordplay is in order as well.

Despite a horrible demonstration of utterly terrible rhyme scheme by Catch 22.

I still think he still took it in every category besides punches. Quix wasn't personal at all.

Vote: Catch 22.