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we'll do 10 lines.. 5 bars
not really familiar with house rules, but sounds good
due.. whenever, don't care

good luck

Aight, I see this, I agree to five bars, and Im checkin in. Probably will be cutting the rug on Sunday.

see, i'll run circles around this played whack freak like an out of shape athlete
he ain't an "MC"... take that away he's just plain nasty

i'll put you outta ya place in the streets like an H&N lease
combine this KO with ambition's so i'm "makin ends meet"

you'll be done once served cause this dumb cunt's curse is jackin the style of alla Rugged Eros much loved work
ain't talkin pussy when i say that you a "rug muncher"

murk, ya whack lines can't beat me, who else gonna tell ya?
because you "serve longer sentences" than nelson mandela

so i wont aim to deplete what you say when you speak
cause you're about to pass the radio for lines "played in a week"

Aight, Im ready for this to come to a conclusion...

Let's get it...

"Who's this dude?" I know MAD SKILLZ, but this "human void" is "obsolete"/
Words from ya mouth dont make sense, someone inform this guy that talk-is-cheap/

You're so non-emcee... Might as well get Quix-on-him, cuz I'll just shit-on-him/
Like Em-on-Kim... Ya styles so out of date that even LeBron James is ready to quit-on-him/ (avatar)(old James jersey)

What you claiming? To be ILLest's "Kung Lao"-or-something??/
"Nomad", ha!, dude's tryin to raise the bar, but I'm already power-pumping/

Enough played lines though, he's not-me, I don't mean to sound cocky/
But this flame I spit will roast you better than any joke told by Gilbert Godfrey/

Wrap-it-up, his raps-not-tough, I'm baggin-sluts while he's always last-to-fuck/
Word round ILLest is Knowmad blows the best, and I'm not talkin bout collapsin-lungs!!!!/


That should be enough to finish him, IMO, but we'll see what the voters have to say... And I took the second line as a compliment Lol. Thanks.

see, i'll run circles around this played whack freak like an out of shape athlete
he ain't an "MC"... take that away he's just plain nasty

great flow..second line sorta sound like a compliment.lol

you'll be done once served cause this dumb cunt's curse is jackin the style of alla Rugged Eros much loved work
ain't talkin pussy when i say that you a "rug muncher"

flow was cool but this didnt hit

because you "serve longer sentences" than nelson mandela

decent. but his lines arent that long?

anywho..cool verse...solid flow was the best part of your verse

"Who's this dude?" I know MAD SKILLZ, but this "human void" is "obsolete"/
Words from ya mouth dont make sense, someone inform this guy that talk-is-cheap

first line was cool..nice play on his name.

You're so non-emcee... Might as well get Quix-on-him, cuz I'll just shit-on-him/
Like Em-on-Kim... Ya styles so out of date that even LeBron James is ready to quit-on-him

nice flow...last line was solid.

What you claiming? To be ILLest's "Kung Lao"-or-something??/
"Nomad", ha!, dude's tryin to raise the bar, but I'm already power-pumping/

dope

over all solid flow good plays on his name and some nice punches..

VOTE :MURK

Good battle buys Know for the first time battle here, shit was good man..
now go sign up in the audio tourney

ABZ

you'll be done once served cause this dumb cunt's curse is jackin the style of alla Rugged Eros much loved work
ain't talkin pussy when i say that you a "rug muncher"

With set up lines being that long, the punchline doesn't hit at all

murk, ya whack lines can't beat me, who else gonna tell ya?
because you "serve longer sentences" than nelson mandela

Nice bar

so i wont aim to deplete what you say when you speak
cause you're about to pass the radio for lines "played in a week"

Decent punch, good wordplay.

Murk:

You're so non-emcee... Might as well get Quix-on-him, cuz I'll just shit-on-him/
Like Em-on-Kim... Ya styles so out of date that even LeBron James is ready to quit-on-him/

Nice punch and wordplay with that James line.

What you claiming? To be ILLest's "Kung Lao"-or-something??/
"Nomad", ha!, dude's tryin to raise the bar, but I'm already power-pumping/

Decent line but not hard enough hitting in a battle.


Enough played lines though, he's not-me, I don't mean to sound cocky/
But this flame I spit will roast you better than any joke told by Gilbert Godfrey/

Had me laughing. Solid punch and nice delivery.

Wrap-it-up, his raps-not-tough, I'm baggin-sluts while he's always last-to-fuck/
Word round ILLest is Knowmad blows the best, and I'm not talkin bout collapsin-lungs!!!!/

Ehhh, not sure about this one. The whole talkin bout guys blowin and all that is kind of played. I think you could have finished the battle stronger.

Overall: Murk

see, i'll run circles around this played whack freak like an out of shape athlete
he ain't an "MC"... take that away he's just plain nasty

I see what you were going for but it came off as more of a compliment than a punch.

i'll put you outta ya place in the streets like an H&N lease
combine this KO with ambition's so i'm "makin ends meet"

Not bad. Nothing special, though.

you'll be done once served cause this dumb cunt's curse is jackin the style of alla Rugged Eros much loved work
ain't talkin pussy when i say that you a "rug muncher"

Eh. Why was that first line so looong? Wordplay was alright.

murk, ya whack lines can't beat me, who else gonna tell ya?
because you "serve longer sentences" than nelson mandela

This was a decent punch that didn't really apply to Murk and was also ironic considering your last bar.

so i wont aim to deplete what you say when you speak
cause you're about to pass the radio for lines "played in a week"

Decent wordplay but didn't hit very hard.


Overall, it flowed very well, save for that third bar. Multies were tight through-out. Unfortunately, the punches were weak and aside from the first bar, none of them were personal.

"Who's this dude?" I know MAD SKILLZ, but this "human void" is "obsolete"/
Words from ya mouth dont make sense, someone inform this guy that talk-is-cheap/

I liked the wordplay here a lot but the punch didn't hit too hard. The first line actually, hit harder, IMO.

You're so non-emcee... Might as well get Quix-on-him, cuz I'll just shit-on-him/
Like Em-on-Kim... Ya styles so out of date that even LeBron James is ready to quit-on-him/ (avatar)(old James jersey)

Good wordplay, again.

What you claiming? To be ILLest's "Kung Lao"-or-something??/
"Nomad", ha!, dude's tryin to raise the bar, but I'm already power-pumping/

I liked this bar a lot. Wordplay was sick. Slipped in some nameplay, as well.

Enough played lines though, he's not-me, I don't mean to sound cocky/
But this flame I spit will roast you better than any joke told by Gilbert Godfrey/

Another good bit of wordplay.

Wrap-it-up, his raps-not-tough, I'm baggin-sluts while he's always last-to-fuck/
Word round ILLest is Knowmad blows the best, and I'm not talkin bout collapsin-lungs!!!!/

Kind of weak for the closer but still decent.


Overall, Good flow and multies. Great wordplay through out. Lacked personals in a lot of bars, though.



This was pretty decent battle. Flow and multies were good from both sides. Murk just had better punches with stronger wordplay. Both sides could've used more personals and name flips, though.

+1 Murk McNasty

Do I really need to break down every line.

Knowmad you greatly need to improve your structure and flow. Your wordplay is half there, but in this battle you were clearly outmatched by someone who had everything you had going on and more.

"Enough played lines though, he's not-me, I don't mean to sound cocky/
But this flame I spit will roast you better than any joke told by Gilbert Godfrey/"

That bar right there was just an example of he kind of material that you couldn't compete with.

Overall: Murk

Punches: Murk
Compexity: Murk
Nameplay: Murk
Flow: Murk
Overall: murk



Nough said ... catsweep here. Up yah game knowmad ... increase your nameplay and punches and you'll do fine. stay active!