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We Put This Together In About 30 Minutes.
But I Think It Came Out Pretty Good

Red - Complexity
Green - Khan Verse
Chorus - Blue

I'm on the Front-lines//
ready to Punch-mine//
M67 frag with me about to Blow-Time//
sneaking in to Roast-Slaim//
Mercenary Fighting for Both-Sides//
he was done when that bullet caught him-in-da-eye//
And now I'm about to Mobil-ize//
hummer with a 50 cal. On the Rise//
so I'm ready to Engage//
blood on my face going into a Berserkin-Rage//
I'm utilize Ready to Communicate//
Hostage-Negotiate//
that terrorist was done when he try to procrastinate//
we left his body hooked in front of his Home Base-Gate//
but the war has just begun//
M16A2, man I'm on the run//

I'm A Soldier In My Own-Rights ||
Got The Fbi Searchin For My Clone-Types ||
Because I Flow-Nice, So I Stole-Snipes ||
Hide Out On Cold-Nights, N Got In Bold-Fights ||
U Know I Load-Flights, With Snipes N Blown-Sites ||
From Unknown-Heights, I've Over Thrown-Micz ||
Now My Bones-Tight, Punches Still Hurt Like A Led-Pipe ||
With A Dead-Strike, N Ur Head-Slice, I leave With A Red-Knife ||
I Took A Feds-Life, Thats Why You Hafta Dread-Life ||
At Any Second, A Weapon, Could Shred-Lives ||
Dealin With Threats-N-Lies, Realize(real eyes) Fear-Death-N-Die ||
Even Perfection-Cries, That's Why I'm Wrecking-Guys ||
My Complex-tion is Now A Reflection Of Measurin ||
Lackin-A-Direction Of Affection, Be Back-In-A-Second ||
I'm Going To Blow Up More Shit Then Iraq-In-Election ||
I Mine As Well Been In The Navy The Way Their Trackin-Veterans ||

A Soldier's Life is never Guarantee and neither is yours
I'm in the middle of a battlefield, and thugs think they're hard-core
I sleep with one eye open, and yours is constantly Shut
Your blind to the world and I'm the one that keeps holdin-it-up.

I got Unparalleled Skills and Tactical Maneuvers At My Disposal//
So tell me What's the enemies Proposal?//
I got Determination-n-Treacherous Brother-n-Arms to fight these Retarded Religion Bo-soz//
So I got My Mission Detail's//
And now I'm about to up Iraq to Retail//
Special Warfare Provides us with Intel//
Seen in the troops and send them suicidal-maniac's to hell//
North Korea wants to get involved//
R&R. Problem Solved//
So let's all grab our guns and get-them-all//
When it's the life of a solider at war no matter what Duty-Calls//
I'm about to make this Bazooka-Haul//
Your messing with a Lethal-Weapons//
I'll have you two-steppin-n-Second-Guessin//
But now it's time for me to leave you all with one question//
Where do we go from here with these "Lethal Weapons?"(Soilder's Lives)

Obviously Technology Threats-All-Ya-See ||
Defiantly Deaths-Callin-Me, Even The Best-Colony ||
I Stress-Geology,Cuz You See Methodically ||
What Could Be, Actually Leave It All-Ta-Me ||
Periodically I Dream, About Brawlin With Machines ||
My Army Lean, Stallin Like Moving On A Beam ||
As My Team Is Crawlin Deep Into A Regime ||
That Seen As Fallin, Cuz Of Our Scheme ||
Leave-Em-Rotten, See-Em-Chop-Em, Bleedin-Droppin ||
Stop-Easin-Off-Em, Its Treason-Often, My Reasons-Topplin ||
Breathin-Stoppin, The Air Their Receiving-Toxin ||
People Are Heaving-Coughin As I'm Thieving-Oxygen ||
Blocks-In-Caution Cops In Moshes, Broken Clocks-In-Offices ||
Time Passin, The Blasts Squashin Kids, My Spittin Ever Lastin ||
Its Like I'm A Dragon, Imagine Being Caught In Fire, I Did, Take Action ||

A Soldier's Life is never Guarantee and neither is yours
I'm in the middle of a battlefield, and thugs think they're hard-core
I sleep with one eye open, and yours is constantly Shut
Your blind to the world and I'm the one that keeps holdin-it-up.

that was too much reading, lol but yea it was cool,

khan verse started out nice with his rhymes, then let them slip, but his verses were very descriptive and alotta really nice vocab, oh yea and "khan verse" is a doooope name hahaha

you carried youre rhyme scheme nice, overall it was pretty entertainin, but yea, im lazy as hell and that was alotta readin haha

thank you like he said we made it in 30mins. now that I'm looking over it...I see some fuck up i need to fix but it's no biggie..i still like the Idea of the song and everything that went with it.

thank you uppin for more feedback

I really felt that shit homez. I said it before, but I got to say it again, Complex, I admire ya skills on em multies homez! Fuckin great!!=D

Khan, I thought that shit was good homez, especially for a newbie. It takes somethin special to get to the level of Complex, but u did good homez. I liked it, was hot!

keep it comin!!

Nice work

Nice yo, keep it up.