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raw verse

Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 6:02 pm
by drunken jesus
i'm a remarkable beast armed on the streets
with a hawk and a piece sawed off at the knees
to chop you in three sections keep stepping
to me's death when a weopons in my reach
reverends believe heaven'll bleed from my exodus
pestillance beyond measurement excellence?
to me dog? effortless my penmanship settles
debts with any heckler nay sayer jester
or fake hater with intentions to disrespect
a glimspe of a metal fist impression into
the delicate skeleton of a fellow spitting
a malevalent embellishment of his elegence
is never rendered or sensed again i'm god
with iron claws defying odds of science, balls
like giant ponds broads are diving on deny it
i could fly to mars and design a plot inside
to unwind the clock of time a defiant spot
i shine'll blind the gods all in the time i lost
inside one bars silent pause

Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 6:15 am
by complexity
Cool. Nice Vocab. And rhyme scheme.

a malevalent embellishment of his elegence
is never rendered or sensed again i'm god
with iron claws defying odds of science, balls
like giant ponds broads are diving on deny it
i could fly to mars and design a plot inside

my favorite part.

Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 3:03 am
by Invincible
Nice