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just typing
hopefully it goes somewhere and i can use it for a new track

yo yo

A Mad titan thats past fighting,stick to using my mind
elusive design made Lucifer die left a skewer inside
Moving in strides while gaining feats in amazing speeds
I break my feet!!Now take a seat before i slay ya team
Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it
@ a concert with mosh pit, 2 many goth kids,screaming growls
then they bleed you out and feed on bowels" were gonna need a towel''!
u believe me now?just wait till its dark and yer all alone
i crawl thru phones and gnaw on bones,Insanity,is what i call my home
saw yer toes just 2 get your nerves working i got these nerds nervous.


i'll be back 2 add more

cool drop brah

thnx brah

yea bro....nasty flow good multies in there tho it was a fast read the enjoyment level was def there...good description with the crawl thru phones line...semmed out a horror movie

Pretty good multies. Flowed well too.,

Nice quick drop with a good flow and multies. Stayed on the scheme, too.

thnx for the feed, i think i'm keep it and add on for a new track.

AbZ The Beast wrote:just typing
hopefully it goes somewhere and i can use it for a new track

yo yo

A Mad titan thats past fighting,stick to using my mind
elusive design made Lucifer die left a skewer inside
Moving in strides while gaining feats in amazing speeds
I break my feet!!Now take a seat before i slay ya team
Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it
@ a concert with mosh pit, 2 many goth kids,screaming growls
then they bleed you out and feed on bowels" were gonna need a towel''!
u believe me now?just wait till its dark and yer all alone
i crawl thru phones and gnaw on bones,Insanity,is what i call my home
saw yer toes just 2 get your nerves working i got these nerds nervous.


i'll be back 2 add more

the entire thing was sick top to bottom really. i mean i have no complaints, the flow seemed pretty much flawless in ways, over all an enjoyrable read.

'Awake or asleep,play with dreams,i'm the monster in the closet
obnoxious and i'm awesome capture your subconscious and toss it'

I like the way that flow, nice shit