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This is my check.

Good luck.

You still spitting whack shit, you got a false reality thinking u can catch wits
Exchange fists for a ratchet, personality of a retard n the punches to match it!

I refrain from help, this kid a skater bitch and wants to turn to X-games for wealth
Obstain from the pain he felt, looked in the mirror n that down syndrome flow explained itself!

Should have been aborted and not born alive, this kids a pussy n only scoring guys
Looked up n I tore his eyes, this battle 7 bars cuz he usually cant write more than five!

You're bars are all musty, you dont enlighten me, you hopeless at best bitch
You tryna to get feed by entitling a piece "must read" n still nobody read it!*

Seq know the effects of e-dating, dropping e, raving, hes be-lating his e-raping
And I'm sorry but I'm not re-lating Im just re-laying to u that you'll never be-mating!**

Writin about girls and dating, what is this lust stuff, homie you aint tough shit
Fell into a rust pit, ya punches dont hit, and it makes sense that u "Shoulda just quit"***

I push metal to rats, melded n mashed wit one hell of an axe, murda those wit medals and ghats
Kill this rebelious cat with the fact that "She Walked Out" cuz of where ur skill level is at!****

* - http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/shoul ... t5114.html
** - http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/effec ... t7321.html
*** - http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/shoul ... t5114.html
**** - http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/she-w ... t7936.html

bill

You still spitting whack shit, you got a false reality thinking u can catch wits
Exchange fists for a ratchet, personality of a retard n the punches to match it!

great flow but didnt really hit. 1/2

I refrain from help, this kid a skater bitch and wants to turn to X-games for wealth
Obstain from the pain he felt, looked in the mirror n that down syndrome flow explained itself!

like this 1

Should have been aborted and not born alive, this kids a pussy n only scoring guys
Looked up n I tore his eyes, this battle 7 bars cuz he usually cant write more than five!

again nice flow... funny stuff 1

You're bars are all musty, you dont enlighten me, you hopeless at best bitch
You tryna to get feed by entitling a piece "must read" n still nobody read it!*

nice 1

Seq know the effects of e-dating, dropping e, raving, hes be-lating his e-raping
And I'm sorry but I'm not re-lating Im just re-laying to u that you'll never be-mating!

1

Writin about girls and dating, what is this lust stuff, homie you aint tough shit
Fell into a rust pit, ya punches dont hit, and it makes sense that u "Shoulda just quit"***

1/2

I push metal to rats, melded n mashed wit one hell of an axe, murda those wit medals and ghats
Kill this rebelious cat with the fact that "She Walked Out" cuz of where ur skill level is at!****

nice ender 1

overall 6 out of seven

SEQ

All you're text spits blew, i'll bash bill till his head splits through
collect his remains and throw em away, because Seq do dead lift's too

nice 1

lead hit you, his stare couldn't charm chicks so he grew a pair of arm bricks
if your shirt got any tighter we could see the actual hair from ya arm pits

good flow but didnt feel it 1/2

this guy boasting he a winner he anit ripped its his clothing getting bigger
notice that im sicker,look at his avy he got caught out posing in the mirror

funny 1

heres an intentional hult cause he thinks bodybuilding is a respectable cult
if Alpha bill could get anymore angry he'd be the actual incredible hulk

1/2

you know how shit taste's i get rib aches when i hear Alpha bill on mixtapes
six cakes and his thick shakes are the main source for his daily intakes

good flow, but nothing hitting 0

i'm sick of this dude and his boring lines there nothing but corny rhymes
if it's not roids, then a growth spurt most of hit him like forty times

1

we were not made equally so get some decency if you want to meet with me
just look at his arms, that's what you get from masturbating frequently!

funny,but seemed like your whole verse was towards his stature 1/2


over all 4 1/2out of seven


VOTEBILL

Thanks for voting, man.

1-0

1 - 5 rating for each bar...


You still spitting whack shit, you got a false reality thinking u can catch wits
Exchange fists for a ratchet, personality of a retard n the punches to match it!

2

I refrain from help, this kid a skater bitch and wants to turn to X-games for wealth
Obstain from the pain he felt, looked in the mirror n that down syndrome flow explained itself!

2

Should have been aborted and not born alive, this kids a pussy n only scoring guys
Looked up n I tore his eyes, this battle 7 bars cuz he usually cant write more than five!

4

You're bars are all musty, you dont enlighten me, you hopeless at best bitch
You tryna to get feed by entitling a piece "must read" n still nobody read it!*

3

Seq know the effects of e-dating, dropping e, raving, hes be-lating his e-raping
And I'm sorry but I'm not re-lating Im just re-laying to u that you'll never be-mating!**

2

Writin about girls and dating, what is this lust stuff, homie you aint tough shit
Fell into a rust pit, ya punches dont hit, and it makes sense that u "Shoulda just quit"***

3

I push metal to rats, melded n mashed wit one hell of an axe, murda those wit medals and ghats
Kill this rebelious cat with the fact that "She Walked Out" cuz of where ur skill level is at!****

3


... The 3's were good concepts that could of been used better,
I feel like some of the bars could of stung more.. added more of a twist.

19/35.






All you're text spits blew, i'll bash bill till his head splits through
collect his remains and throw em away, because Seq do dead lift's too

3

lead hit you, his stare couldn't charm chicks so he grew a pair of arm bricks
if your shirt got any tighter we could see the actual hair from ya arm pits

1 ( gunplay, armpit hair that doesn't need to be Acknowledged)

this guy boasting he a winner he anit ripped its his clothing getting bigger
notice that im sicker,look at his avy he got caught out posing in the mirror

2

heres an intentional hult cause he thinks bodybuilding is a respectable cult
if Alpha bill could get anymore angry he'd be the actual incredible hulk

2

you know how shit taste's i get rib aches when i hear Alpha bill on mixtapes
six cakes and his thick shakes are the main source for his daily intakes

2.. you could of dropped the Six cakes

i'm sick of this dude and his boring lines there nothing but corny rhymes
if it's not roids, then a growth spurt most of hit him like forty times

4 , Nice

we were not made equally so get some decency if you want to meet with me
just look at his arms, that's what you get from masturbating frequently!

3 LoL your 2 last lines were funny , good shit.

17/35.

Looks like Bill won by a hair in my opinion, this is a close match though it could be debated. cause sequences first, and last 2 lines were Heavy hitters.

Vote/ Bill

You still spitting whack shit, you got a false reality thinking u can catch wits
Exchange fists for a ratchet, personality of a retard n the punches to match it!

Not a bad dis but not really a hard punch. Flowed well. 3/5

I refrain from help, this kid a skater bitch and wants to turn to X-games for wealth
Obstain from the pain he felt, looked in the mirror n that down syndrome flow explained itself!

Another punchless dis. Kind of funny, though. 3/5

Should have been aborted and not born alive, this kids a pussy n only scoring guys
Looked up n I tore his eyes, this battle 7 bars cuz he usually cant write more than five!

Nice personal. 3/5

You're bars are all musty, you dont enlighten me, you hopeless at best bitch
You tryna to get feed by entitling a piece "must read" n still nobody read it!*

Another good personal. 3/5

Seq know the effects of e-dating, dropping e, raving, hes be-lating his e-raping
And I'm sorry but I'm not re-lating Im just re-laying to u that you'll never be-mating!**

Keep em coming. 3/5

Writin about girls and dating, what is this lust stuff, homie you aint tough shit
Fell into a rust pit, ya punches dont hit, and it makes sense that u "Shoulda just quit"***

Another good personal. 3/5

I push metal to rats, melded n mashed wit one hell of an axe, murda those wit medals and ghats
Kill this rebelious cat with the fact that "She Walked Out" cuz of where ur skill level is at!****

Good closer and the best personal of the verse. 4/5

22/35 Overall a nice personal dis but it lacked punches. Consistent flow. Good shit.

All you're text spits blew, i'll bash bill till his head splits through
collect his remains and throw em away, because Seq do dead lift's too

Nice shit. Good personal and wordplay. 4/5

lead hit you, his stare couldn't charm chicks so he grew a pair of arm bricks
if your shirt got any tighter we could see the actual hair from ya arm pits

Not bad. Decent personal. 3/5

this guy boasting he a winner he anit ripped its his clothing getting bigger
notice that im sicker,look at his avy he got caught out posing in the mirror

Started strong but ended weak. 2/5

heres an intentional hult cause he thinks bodybuilding is a respectable cult
if Alpha bill could get anymore angry he'd be the actual incredible hulk

Not much of a dis. What's a hult? 1/5

you know how shit taste's i get rib aches when i hear Alpha bill on mixtapes
six cakes and his thick shakes are the main source for his daily intakes

Another pretty weak bar. 2/5

i'm sick of this dude and his boring lines there nothing but corny rhymes
if it's not roids, then a growth spurt most of hit him like forty times

I think the growth spurt line would've worked better on a fat guy(minus the part about roids) but this still made me laugh. 3/5

we were not made equally so get some decency if you want to meet with me
just look at his arms, that's what you get from masturbating frequently!

Nice closer! Best bar in the battle, I think. 4/5


19/25 Some really good punches weighed down with some really weak filler. Excellent flow.



I'm giving my vote to Bill for being more consistent with the personals and disses. Good battle, though, on both sides.

+1 Alpha Bill

3-0

Uppin