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If his multies matched he might be dope but in spite he hopes then writes and chokes
It's a fact he's a faggot with all the pipe he smokes I wont resort to the whitey jokes

"White America, I could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this,
White America, Erica loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get, white America, I
Could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this, white America, Erica
Loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get..."

Chorus Had Me Rollin'

Damn Yall Two Going At It

tried to listen to your audios but I hear nothing but pops and hisses so stop the bitchin
Never claim that you rock shows just because you sing while you mop the kitchen

Dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!LOL... Thats An Ill Personal Bro.... Nice Drop...::::Waiting For Catch To Drop Another Now::::

t's kind of sad how half of Em's songs are aimed at you so we'll say it's true
Sit down and listen Stan cuz I'll more than tame a shrew this lame is screwed
You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?"

lol

solid response

You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?

best line imo

I'll end it short though because I already broke this cracker and smoked the herb
I don't needa choke a rapper I'll just scope this bird and murder him with spoken word

these were probably the best multi usage in the script. Not exactly sure if I "Catch" what youre aiming at, but it flowed well and the structure is clean. No real complaints. pretty nice over all.

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'I don't needa choke a rapper I'll just scope this bird and murder him with spoken word'

Raw endin, nice

Lmao @ that chorus

but word man you went in again
I wonder where Catch is at tho?
I think you ran him off dawg..lulz
either way this whole piece was on point
took that Em chorus to a different level
sting was on point with your lines tho'
keep it up maaaan

quit throwing jabs, they never win a fight.

Maaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn U Said It....

There's no need to take shots at this geek while his plot's gettin weak
There's no stopping the streak he's still waiting for albums to drop when they leak

LMAO




If his multies matched he might be dope but in spite he hopes then writes and chokes
It's a fact he's a faggot with all the pipe he smokes I wont resort to the whitey jokes

going in

He's just a wannabe Marshall if that matters I don't think it is but if he's Mathers
What's all this shit he splatters? I think you missed the matter while you sit and chatter

lol humor with a swing,

This faggot even shaved his head while trying to mimic Eminems flow
But, I'm "Cleaning Out My Closet" while you're "White America" this aint no Eminem Show

lol I see where you was going

"White America, I could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this,
White America, Erica loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get, white America, I
Could be one of your kids, white America, little Eric looks just like this, white America, Erica
Loves my shit, I go to TRL, look how many hugs I get..."

^^ Lmao, got the eminem beat in my head now


It's kind of sad how half of Em's songs are aimed at you so we'll say it's true
Sit down and listen Stan cuz I'll more than tame a shrew this lame is screwed

LoL 'aimed at you'.

You're not a problem when you can't even structure a rhyme scheme
How can you structure a punch while you're asking "What's that line mean!?"

Nice

I tried to listen to your audios but I hear nothing but pops and hisses so stop the bitchin
Never claim that you rock shows just because you sing while you mop the kitchen


LOL you're a asshole,I Like the humor

I'll end it short though because I already broke this cracker and smoked the herb
I don't needa choke a rapper I'll just scope this bird and murder him with spoken word


Blam .. lol good finish.


I Liked this, it had hard punches, humor, good flow lol
I didn't like the Em hook, but thats just me, you strung the verses 2gether well.

Good shit, keep dropping