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EMEYE · Post by **EMEYE** » Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:01 pm

Track originally was with my boy, he went first and spit 24 bars and then I went second and spit 24 bars. This is just my 24 bars. Feedback is greatly appreciated I'm still trying to get the hang of recording.

FlipSide · Post by **FlipSide** » Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:00 am

Its Kinda Loud...But The Flow Is Def Tight... Might Wanna Lower Your Vocals A Lil Tho... Nice Punch Lines And Metaphores.... Flow Is On Point Too And I Also Like The Beat...Its Amped Up ...Good Drop Bro...WOuld Like To Hear More From U With Better Quality

Sentus · Post by **Sentus** » Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:17 am

Yeah, lower the vocals like that guy said. This was dope though, rhymes were good and the flow/delivery made the rhymes even sound better. You kind of forced some rhymes at the end but its all good.

AbZ The Beast · Post by **AbZ The Beast** » Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:24 am

solid verse my dude..flow was nice, with some nice lines laced in there.
drop a complete track homie

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:28 am

yea def lower ur vocals man beat was decent... not sure if it's jus me but u sound like dis dude name Dosia style sounds da same 2 dats jus me tho. Flow was decent good use sum work overall it was a decent drop man keep droppin'

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