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Plain n simple

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:45 am
by Haz
Like advertisers i'ma Target aboard
i'm targeting the mic like darting the cord
with the eye of the Tiger, shark fin fa sword
I'm putting in work my mark is in store
a job core vet like I'm not parking accords
So much talk of Haz, they my Walking Ad's
Deaded To me yelling in they Coffins Mad
I Get it if i'm Lost they glad
Cause losing me is Losing a loss they have
Ego'd out rulers its like they were taught to brag
See the turbins that I rock as they take off the rags
Lets rake together you was Brought To bag
Hazard's verses come with Caution Tags
If I buy the notebook better believe it'll Cost the Pad
So its cost is never Bought its flagged
in the cycle of worth caught when Passed
They say hello to the world good bye to ya dreams
But iv'e grown with the world never to Fly through a dream
Music To my ears is Supply for the fiends
itching like extremists hitting like a phoenix
tripping like I seen this when a chick was shifting on the penis
Birthing a Plan that occurs in demand like church in Sudan
my ora fly's horrified, tor-tis tided morph this ride,
skip the bull tryna bring Ambition down ya goals ain't Prioritized
I Change feeling like Musical bums with hats on the ground
nothing butt gaining like thighs extra stacking a pound
cats is some clowns passing the crown smacking um down
Cause i'm dead Up flying in the win like how ashes would sound
Am Be in a silent mode, you'd swear he'd be sleeping
heart beating as A pill for the Tyrant Code
got the blues Popping up like a stretch beyond reaching
bones fractured by a Violent Load, breathing Like a check up
Fiending for my Next Buck, season ain't a Word to Him
Plain N simple he'll last Decades Earning Wins

Re: Plain n simple

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:25 am
by AbZ The Beast
So much talk of Haz, they my Walking Ad's
dope
They say hello to the world good bye to ya dreams
But iv'e grown with the world never to Fly through a dream
i like this even though it was repeated.
Fiending for my Next Buck, season ain't a Word to Him
Plain N simple he'll last Decades Earning Wins
nice verse dude.
flow was solid as fuck.

Re: Plain n simple

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:15 am
by FlipSide
They say hello to the world good bye to ya dreams
But iv'e grown with the world never to Fly through a dream
Dope Bar
Birthing a Plan that occurs in demand like church in Sudan
LOL at this Line
Fiending for my Next Buck, season ain't a Word to Him
Plain N simple he'll last Decades Earning Wins
Nice Ending Here

Aiight Bro To Be Honest With U... Of Cource This is My opinion As A Mediocre Writer, But I got Lost a Lot During Ur verse. Seems A lot Is Put In There For The Purpose Of Flow And Rhyme But I Didnt See Where Some Bars Were Getting At.. i Believe That In Audio With Certain Pauses n Inflections It Would Do A Lot Better. Had some Dope Lines N Bars In There Tho... Nice Drop

Re: Plain n simple

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:17 am
by Quix
SMH .. .but i wasn't really feeling the quotables above ^^

i didn't understand 40% of the verse!

Re: Plain n simple

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:09 pm
by QwarterZ
Haz always bringing that gully shit to the board
I'm diggin' it, a lot of your rhymes do seem Style P-ish
which is cool, I can hear this spat over a raw ass beat
which would come off sickly, keep dropping my dude
got a few lines already quoted up there but..this one got me

Cause losing me is Losing a loss they have
Ego'd out rulers its like they were taught to brag
See the turbins that I rock as they take off the rags
Lets rake together you was Brought To bag
Hazard's verses come with Caution Tags
If I buy the notebook better believe it'll Cost the Pad
So its cost is never Bought its flagged
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

dope shit man, keep it up!