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Wisdom

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 10:11 pm
by Audible Thought
my thought process develops a childs cerebral cortex
seeds of life in context i impregnate with my breath
manifest death itself to break thru the eggs shell
tell the tale of divine men who've been thru hell
life's a puzzle if you spend your days in the huddle
trying to get your quarter back is the epitome of a struggle
mental expansion is a beast with a leash and a muzzle
feast on beliefs that all you see is grief in the puddle
depression isn't subtle if theres boundaries to your fire
rain is inevitable,
its your choice to let it burn out your desires
get tangled in the barb wire when we wear uniforms
holdin hands in unison but peace isnt to be performed
its treasured in the roots springs into life at dawn
but we're sedated pawns perpetuated to never spawn
thats why im inclined to describe this problematic cycle
life is not spiteful once your eyes leave the chamber of a rifle

Re: Wisdom

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:59 am
by IntrinsicCadence
Nice. I'm feeling this. The message is tight, and the rhythm is consistent.

Re: Wisdom

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:02 am
by FlipSide
mental expansion is a beast with a leash and a muzzle
feast on beliefs that all you see is grief in the puddle
Niiiiceeee Deep And Word Play Incorporation
thats why im inclined to describe this problematic cycle
life is not spiteful once your eyes leave the chamber of a rifle
Had some descent lines in there and your message carried alright.. i believe u couldve made this more impactful but still a dope delivery here... Ups

Re: Wisdom

Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 2:48 pm
by Audible Thought
thanks homies