Hip Hop Forum

House rules.
No swaying, flipping, free posting.

4 bars

Verses due in an hour. No checks needed.

Good luck.

-- 10 Sep 2010 03:14 --

Stand therefore, having your loins girt about with truth, and having on the breastplate of righteousness;
Ephesians 6:14, if it isnt clear, I have the power of Christ with spits, accepted the challenge, just so I could smite this bitch!

My best advice would be for you leave b4 I wreck ya lines, u dont got techs n nines
He a demon but not yet to die, look at my pic, kid, it aint nothing for me to 'Excersise'!

His verses r all one liners, he rhymes the same, and we know his rap are shit
In Hell, I reign, if he's just a demon, than consider me Pacino in 'The Devils Advocate'!

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/demon ... ml#p133661

I think u should jus hunker down, gave him holy water to floss his teeth, after this your losses will raise 1
Put this clown 'under-gound' with a cross to his cheek and send this faggot back to where he came from!

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_details. ... &id=370312

Biter!!

Complexity Edit: Doom from that site is a biter.

lol

I dont know if I should happy that someone thinks I'm good enough to bite my verse or not.

id have to give this one to omega bill. i was diggin his flips. his setups could use some work but he stayed consistent with the lines.

i was feelin that obama campaign line from demon. its just his lines were a bit short and really felt empty and basic. had good flow and all but nothing was really hitting hard. it just seems like you took this lightly.

vote-omega

Punches- Bill
Personals- Bill
Flow- Demon
Everything else- Bill

Overall- Bill... by a long shot

Demon didn't really have any personal punches in there, although that last line was funny (though would have worked better somewhere in the middle than as the closer). Bill had some nice punches in there, and I dug some of the wordplay in there. There was creative as hell lines Bill brought to the table here, the exorcism word play was funny as shit. I did however loose the flow a few times as I read Bill's piece, some more internal rhyming would help keep the rhythm moving. In a lot of your pieces Bill, I feel like you got creative shit to spit, but I've noticed quite a few times that it seems to be lacking rhythm. Maybe that's just in the way I read it, but maybe if you did some vocal practicing, freestyling or whatever, it might improve the underlying rhythm.

My best advice would be for you leave b4 I wreck ya lines, u dont got techs n nines
He a demon but not yet to die, look at my pic, kid, it aint nothing for me to 'Excersise'!

His verses r all one liners, he rhymes the same, and we know his rap are shit
In Hell, I reign, if he's just a demon, than consider me Pacino in 'The Devils Advocate'!

best lines in the battle. The word play was nice and the name flips in the punchs were done pretty good. The first line was kinda more boastful but with the word play in it, it made up for it.

-- Wed Sep 15, 2010 1:39 am --

You Drop The Gayest Text, And Got Raped By Vets
You Must Love Getting Whooped ... Like Domination Sex!
the punch wasnt that great, the multis nice.

Am I Amazing? Yes, Ima End This Viscious
Murdering Bill Online Like I Was Lynchin Clinton!
if this was worded better this coulda been good

Demon Spit The Sickest! u & Scotts a Damn Lame
Before i Drop ya Man James, Ima Have O Ate Like Obamas Campaign (08)
best line in ya verse. The O ATE was pretty good

Y'all Watch This Man Hate, With his Sloppy Flow
Last time I Liked Bill? Was In The Cosby Show
Aite closer, was better then the opener i think


But I think Bill pretty much kept consistent with the name flips/punchs more. I consider name flips as personals also cuz when it comes to online ish, not really much more you can do lest you find something on the dude.

VOTE-Bill


Heres my battle with explicit, hollahttp://www.illestlyrics.com/board/anti-explicit-vt18321.html

Hmm..Alright, i Wanted Jack To check This Out, But It's Cool.

3-0.

my vote doesnt have to count because i realize i havent met the 50 post requirement yet so its cool i was just dropping feedback really.

Nah Just Close This.

Good battle, man.

3-0 K.O.

-Closed and Updated-