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Goin in for life ...

Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:17 am
by pablo1212
-The judge hasn't considered anything that iv'e sed now
-I jus keep my head down waitin for the desicsion
-I can hear predictions , all of the crowd is mixed in
-Everythin ive done , i did it , I wouldnt fix it
-Cause no matter the outcome Im destined to be prisoned
-Right behind bars , in my thoughts , or in my visions
-The judge is ready to speak, so all I can do is listen
-Impatiently I wait , Im ready for my convitction
-he sed ,"I shuld justify , the crime that was committed"
-Every line & rhyme you killed it everything that you have written
-Simply has been consistent , all the verses that heard of
-All of it was slaughter so Im chargen you w/ murder"

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Re: Goin in for life ...

Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:51 am
by DoggyStylez
Good flow thru it man. I kno ur gonna cop some flack from other as its a simple ryme, but in my opinion these make tha best rymez....keep on postin loco.

Re: Goin in for life ...

Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:00 am
by FlipSide
I Dunno Man I thought this Topic Was Def Dopeness.. Being Charged For Murdering The Rhymes u Write... I Must Say Thats Original To Me.. Kinda Short But It Had Aiight Flow And Good Rhymes In There...Stay Dropping

Re: Goin in for life ...

Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:29 am
by TheNobleOne
haha that was pretty dope man. nice rhymes and the flow was nice.

Re: Goin in for life ...

Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:42 am
by pablo1212
thanks guys. .

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