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Posted: **Fri Sep 24, 2010 8:29 am**

Strategies a Must have Tragically you'll Duck Haz
Magically this casualty gets a masterpiece out Rough Draft
Best Believe I Shred um when my Aims Set on The Fight
Rest In Peace I Dead Um when my reign gets On The Mic
You checking Out my blueprint I'm On To The Next Caliber
Grave Digger Figure He'd 'Jack The Rippa(Minus Text Battler
Never Puzzled,You Had a idea thought to Drop it would be Clever,
I'm not going on a rant about my pieces cause I Got My Shit together
you started trying to Interupt me Little sucker Whats rush 4 Unlucky tucker
Trying to uncover..I Don't Need to hide..But Your One Ugly Mother Fucker
I guess you planned for a Match,fact 'Damn it you're Wack
you can't manage ya act to get Air Play like theres a Panic attack
you ain't No problem just a Lesson what you're jotting is Depressing
this dude couldn't Hold Himself Up ..Robbing His Reflection
Hazards the nutcase remember? so He ain't a crazy Threat
Dudes a Fast Slaughter Like Reason The 4 ain't Eating with Shady Yet
Inner Voices Com Ya Type you ain't got a Grip On Shit you're a Anaconda Bite
Like Reincarnated i'm Beyond The Light, See what playing Russian roulette
In a Song is Like..

Posted: **Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:06 am**

See the rhyme skeem was off the hook boo boo, think the drop had a really dope swag to it, hard. I still can't look past the fact the rhymes were on point and connected for more that 10 lines, then to top it off there were some punchlines in there, so this gets in my cool post list! Next time let me get on that collab

Posted: **Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:24 am**

Well versed that it flows nicely. Punchlines delivered jus that, last line on russian roulette was cool. I can't find any faults on this, tha ryme scheme was well written which helped it flow so smoothly....

"you started trying to Interupt me Little sucker Whats rush 4 Unlucky tucker
Trying to uncover..I Don't Need to hide..But Your One Ugly Mother Fucker"....prob tha only lines not diggin, but it gets a laugh lol....

peace homie...

Posted: **Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:35 pm**

Probably the most consistent diss verse I've ever seen from you.

Flow never fell off and like Doggy said "you started trying to Interupt me Little sucker Whats rush 4 Unlucky tucker
Trying to uncover..I Don't Need to hide..But Your One Ugly Mother Fucker" is the only bar of the entire piece that could have been re-written.

Even with that though, the flow was on point, and the punches you had landed nicely.

Good shit.

Posted: **Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:14 am**

This was pretty cool man you always consistent with what you do
which is dope, nice to see you drop a bit more on here
not much to say that's already been said...dope piece man

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