Hip Hop Forum

Freestyle:

This is just a quick spit, cuz I gotta jet in a sec
but I just wanna let- a rhythm be lit
so I am given my scripts a quick visit
like an incision or a pin prick
cuz even if I'm missin' a bit, my rhythm is sick,
a-rhythm-aticulous, with a vision ridiculous,
while your evicted kid, I keep givin' my riffs
a lift to reck this shit, and I never miss
when I aim to hit with my verbal fists
If you list what you hurdle, will u even jump a bit
cuz while I am livin this- life, you just never did,
but like a knife I slice through life's obstacles
cuz I am willing to take on the impossible
I am not a fool, but I ain't just tryin' to be cool
instead I would rather live responsible,
then try to act how others would ask
cuz I'mma never redact myself from my tasks
but I'll pass your ass, and while you fat cats crash fast
I'll have the last laugh

the beginning is what really stood out to me not much else popping off besides that the flow in the beginning is what really got me but after u tried to switch it up it just fell off a bit the content was alright though

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