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y'all act like this dudes text is hard, if they say it then i guess you are
just dont extend your neck too far to see how much he stretched his bars

24-0?...

juss' peep lies he gon' post, who you were beat by i don't know
but jadakiss raisin fingers for each time you no showed :/ (check his avy)


you compliment half of your fans so they vote to add to your chance
cause "jackfruit" and i ain't talking southern african plants

i'll tell you you're wack in advance before this pussy bitch starts
7 full "bars" of "shots from JD" and you still couldn't hit hard

cause this faggot spits street, but his rap isn't pristine
He has more lines full of stupid shit than some Hazard and Quix beef

See Dj- R could mix rap... Dr. J could pick traps*
J.R.D. was rich off of his dad... sadly, idk wtf happened to this cat?

J.D.R.

i hope you know ya show is done, i could end with a boastful pun
instead "try not to lose to ScottJames or no show on TheNobleOne"

expos:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jackfruit
Dj- R is a famous DJ, and Dr. J (Julius Erving) was formerly a famous basketball player
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J._R._D._Tata

It's grind time & damnnn you anotha statistic

>>YO.......

Ya words sprayed wit glarin’ glows & I don’t care to Know but aint he learned paint don’t spare his flow?
His verse caked to stare at folks, while I notice the only bitch Wit Know exist on First Date Scenarios

Are you concerned? Great. We can tell it shows, I merit quotes while you fold wit forced claims
& I’ve been told his sorts lame, coz the only Disc That Madd En is sold as a sports game

This nigga on a course to report pain, leave you short changed, I’m floodin’ him wit lyrical weapons
Have you clutchin' them spiritual blessins, ya history, so no wonder Know Ah Past Event like studyin' Biblical Lessons

Nigga, you a pittiful mess then, I'm impressed? When??? Not when ya text disguised wit tha same views
So when ya best of tries tanks too, remember if Know a real man i'd rather be mesmerized by the fake dudes

A weapon wit lines to rape you that embraced truth, ignite the killin spree until ya felt owned man
My writes can willingly swell those hands, while Know-Key-A-Bad Drop, like the reliability of Cell Phone Brands

Ya rhymes n silly frees are left so damned & Know’s plans must be gapped & clumsy to try n rap above me
& Yeah, his past is funny, his first battle & nothin’s left after Bills like he was Bad with money

Juss grasp the fact I’ll clap this dummy, Jack is hungry, so it’s juss soft sounds when text drops him
so when you fall down ya breath got thin, so you could say Mad is Sonned like small towns in Wisconsin

Lemme break this shit down cause this battle was mad close imo.

Knowmad:

y'all act like this dudes text is hard, if they say it then i guess you are
just dont extend your neck too far to see how much he stretched his bars

I thought that was pretty funny, and executed well

juss' peep lies he gon' post, who you were beat by i don't know
but jadakiss raisin fingers for each time you no showed :/ (check his avy)

I see what ya were tryin to say but it didn't connect for me. Dude no shows twice you ain't exactly ragging on him

you compliment half of your fans so they vote to add to your chance
cause "jackfruit" and i ain't talking southern african plants

Nah, only way it would hit hard is if the plant was called 'jacksafruit' and it's futile comin with punches that only 5% of the board are gonna understand on the 1st read

i'll tell you you're wack in advance before this pussy bitch starts
7 full "bars" of "shots from JD" and you still couldn't hit hard

Nice, I ain't got no problem with this one

cause this faggot spits street, but his rap isn't pristine
He has more lines full of stupid shit than some Hazard and Quix beef

Nah

See Dj- R could mix rap... Dr. J could pick traps*
J.R.D. was rich off of his dad... sadly, idk wtf happened to this cat?

It was aight

i hope you know ya show is done, i could end with a boastful pun
instead "try not to lose to ScottJames or no show on TheNobleOne"

Aight

JDR:

Ya words sprayed wit glarin’ glows & I don’t care to Know but aint he learned paint don’t spare his flow?
His verse caked to stare at folks, while I notice the only bitch Wit Know exist on First Date Scenarios

Aight

Are you concerned? Great. We can tell it shows, I merit quotes while you fold wit forced claims
& I’ve been told his sorts lame, coz the only Disc That Madd En is sold as a sports game

Creative idea, it would sound more natural if ya said 'disc with madd en'

This nigga on a course to report pain, leave you short changed, I’m floodin’ him wit lyrical weapons
Have you clutchin' them spiritual blessins, ya history, so no wonder Know Ah Past Event like studyin' Biblical Lessons

Pretty nice

Nigga, you a pittiful mess then, I'm impressed? When??? Not when ya text disguised wit tha same views
So when ya best of tries tanks too, remember if Know a real man i'd rather be mesmerized by the fake dudes

Wasn't feelin it

A weapon wit lines to rape you that embraced truth, ignite the killin spree until ya felt owned man
My writes can willingly swell those hands, while Know-Key-A-Bad Drop, like the reliability of Cell Phone Brands

Nah, shit was stretched as hell

Ya rhymes n silly frees are left so damned & Know’s plans must be gapped & clumsy to try n rap above me
& Yeah, his past is funny, his first battle & nothin’s left after Bills like he was Bad with money

Nice I got no complaints about this

Juss grasp the fact I’ll clap this dummy, Jack is hungry, so it’s juss soft sounds when text drops him
so when you fall down ya breath got thin, so you could say Mad is Sonned like small towns in Wisconsin

Nah that looked forced aswell

cats-
Flow: Knowmad
Multis: JDR
Punches: JDR
Personals: Tied

JDR gets my final vote by a hair.

Flow - Knowmad
Multis - JDR
Punches - JDR
Personals - JDR

i think apart from the stretched bars from Jack he took it for me personally, Knowmad you had some nice lines none the less but Jack had a harder impact with his lines and thats why my vote goes to Jack

Vote - Jack

Thx for peepin'. 2-0.

its clear which direction this is headed. i think jdr should just accept the loss and we can close this thread up

Nice fucking battle guys. Here's my break down...

Knowmad-
y'all act like this dudes text is hard, if they say it then i guess you are
just dont extend your neck too far to see how much he stretched his bars

This opener hurt you the most IMO. The first line is like a hype to him instead of a diss, but I like how the punch was relevant in this battle.

juss' peep lies he gon' post, who you were beat by i don't know
but jadakiss raisin fingers for each time you no showed :/ (check his avy)

Nice personal. If worded a little different it could have landed harder, but this is in the write direction. My only question so far is, where's the wordplay?

you compliment half of your fans so they vote to add to your chance
cause "jackfruit" and i ain't talking southern african plants

There it is!!! Nice punch/wordplay/set-up/ Perfect bar here

i'll tell you you're wack in advance before this pussy bitch starts
7 full "bars" of "shots from JD" and you still couldn't hit hard

LMFAO this was nice bro. Feeling it to the fullest.

cause this faggot spits street, but his rap isn't pristine
He has more lines full of stupid shit than some Hazard and Quix beef

Once again had me rolling. Sick punchlines here.

See Dj- R could mix rap... Dr. J could pick traps*
J.R.D. was rich off of his dad... sadly, idk wtf happened to this cat?

Dude, this was the sickest fucking bar in the battle IMO. The way its worded, the wordplay, the set-up, the delivery, fucking greatness...

i hope you know ya show is done, i could end with a boastful pun
instead "try not to lose to ScottJames or no show on TheNobleOne"

The punch is sick, but what hurt this as a closer is it didnt seem to do well until that last part of the last line. Nothing really creative led into it.



JDR-
Ya words sprayed wit glarin’ glows & I don’t care to Know but aint he learned paint don’t spare his flow?
His verse caked to stare at folks, while I notice the only bitch Wit Know exist on First Date Scenarios

Nice play here, but you've had harder openers fam. Just seemed like the wording was off to me.

Are you concerned? Great. We can tell it shows, I merit quotes while you fold wit forced claims
& I’ve been told his sorts lame, coz the only Disc That Madd En is sold as a sports game

This is fucking sick right here. Nice nameflip, and hard hitting.

This nigga on a course to report pain, leave you short changed, I’m floodin’ him wit lyrical weapons
Have you clutchin' them spiritual blessins, ya history, so no wonder Know Ah Past Event like studyin' Biblical Lessons

Another sick line. Feeling this one.

Nigga, you a pittiful mess then, I'm impressed? When??? Not when ya text disguised wit tha same views
So when ya best of tries tanks too, remember if Know a real man i'd rather be mesmerized by the fake dudes

Lmfao. I like how you worded this one. Direct hit.

A weapon wit lines to rape you that embraced truth, ignite the killin spree until ya felt owned man
My writes can willingly swell those hands, while Know-Key-A-Bad Drop, like the reliability of Cell Phone Brands

I like how its delivered, but this concept is kinda played to me, so it doesnt hit quite as hard.

Ya rhymes n silly frees are left so damned & Know’s plans must be gapped & clumsy to try n rap above me
& Yeah, his past is funny, his first battle & nothin’s left after Bills like he was Bad with money

Nice personal diss but not as hard hitting to me as the others either... For some reason it doesnt get me that much.

Juss grasp the fact I’ll clap this dummy, Jack is hungry, so it’s juss soft sounds when text drops him
so when you fall down ya breath got thin, so you could say Mad is Sonned like small towns in Wisconsin

Lol this was a solid closer. Had me rolling and it hits home.

Vote- after looking over them again I would have to say that I give the edge to Jack, just for being more consistant over-all really... Know, I know you are used to writing for tracks, but expanding your bars a little more in text might help you connect and bring more to your verses... Jack, yits almost like you slept on this one compared to alot of the verses Ive read of yours, but you brought what you needed to the table, which is what its about. You ot the W.

Good looks on the vote & battle.

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Was this battle updated? Records changed but not closed?

Mine hasnt been updated. Pretty sure Knowmad was 0-1 when this finished so I'm guessin' his was.

i have no updated this, might wanna check with murk if he's updated someone's records

Records updated and thread closed