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just a stroll

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:06 am
by Haz
Its to a beat.. I have about a minute more to write.

I put the cigs down yes I'm Breathing Lovely
Even buddies with that Depression your Seeking From Me
Some see May as a Screaming Druggie
But shits Looking so Good n they Seen as Ugly
Not Like the Rest so no Relief for the Urgency
No cold feet for the determined spree
my lyrics like to sit in the infirmary
rhythm is with my wallet's currency
I own the company so the beat works fa me
How C.e.o could a Person be
The beat works fa Me
i'll pay 4 casket cost when its cursed debree
mix the ashes with bags of Dirt fa tree's
Watch my music grow Like a verse of seeds
my grass is greener can't be Disturbed with weed
Let um in ya zone just to observe the greed
i'm all around nice 4get The best in Town
while egos are Protecting crowns
i'm immune to the bull like what infection Now?
If you climbing on my sac Sorry to Let ya Down
I'm erasing my own tracks till no steps is found
so my blueprint can't influence & direct ya sound
When you drop in the flow I hope you're set ta Drown
The ability of fillings seems to be Killing Me
infront of Cam vividly It is willingly
Being real is still the key, ya codes crack Me up
cupping Humility is in the Bag that Fills the Tea
Funny flames wanna run Me game when the Money came
Chicks with no self respect are Bummie dames
always a Rifle for a Playboy Bunnies Claim
Dollars destroy lives so every single pennies lethal
stressing or doped up Like plenty needles
Everyones so four Themselves theres no semi Peaceful
So four themselves a family of 5 equals to twenty People

Re: just a stroll

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:27 am
by JDR
How C.e.o could a Person be
The beat works fa Me
i'll pay 4 casket cost when its cursed debree
mix the ashes with bags of Dirt fa tree's
Watch my music grow Like a verse of seeds
my grass is greener can't be Disturbed with weed
Let um in ya zone just to observe the greed

This shit right here is nice as hell.

Everyones so four Themselves theres no semi Peaceful
So four themselves a family of 5 equals to twenty People

Dope ass closer.

Can't believe this gettin' slept on. Probably the sickest flow that the scriptures got out right now. You can follow it damn near perfect. You need to audio this up Haz.

Re: just a stroll

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:41 am
by Kau the Lion
J D R wrote:How C.e.o could a Person be
The beat works fa Me
i'll pay 4 casket cost when its cursed debree
mix the ashes with bags of Dirt fa tree's
Watch my music grow Like a verse of seeds
my grass is greener can't be Disturbed with weed
Let um in ya zone just to observe the greed

This shit right here is nice as hell.

Everyones so four Themselves theres no semi Peaceful
So four themselves a family of 5 equals to twenty People

Dope ass closer.
Those are the exact excerpts I was going to point out myself. This is pretty nice overall. Def had a tight flow.

Re: just a stroll

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:46 am
by - Mutual -
man this wasnt a bad piece, you shouldnt center it the layout looks messed up but none the less the flow was good i managed to find one, the rhymes them selves were basic but not in a sense of feeling and emtotion had it going for it i liked it Haz good drop

Re: just a stroll

Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 12:48 am
by Orfadox
Watch my music grow Like a verse of seeds
my grass is greener can't be Disturbed with weed





^^^Gotta Be My Fav Bar In The Whole Peice....Saying That Man Shit Was Good Flow Was Consistent Throughout Content Was Pretty Good Overall Made For A Pretty Good Read Man....Should Defo Audio That Man