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5 bars
due Thursday

waitin for check in

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-- Wed Oct 06, 2010 6:11 am --

Still no check in?? Come on..

What's the rule if a person doesn't check in and drop by the due date?

Check. i'll drop 2nite.

I might as well key in now then...

Droppin >>>>

I'm the fukn truth and that's always what it has been, so why am I wastin time fukn with this Haz been?/
Trapped in the house kid Haz never had friends, so let me introduce you "HI Haz THIS IS THE END"/
"THE END THIS IS Haz" I'm sure you've problably crossed paths, but imma make sure you keep it touch like he ya grandad/
Pussy ass heel wearin flame wit a handbag, you better off tryna survive a battle over Baghdad/
Shame this lame really wanna battle me, im killing Haz in every dimension like Saw in 3D/
This gotta be a clear win all in HD, hang this dude all on the wall like a fukn flat screen/
Faggot I said let's battle he grabbed the vaseline, went and smeared it on his face and took off his earrings/
Supreme Lyricist my ass take away his posts please!, only time he ups a post is when he down on both knees/
I can ease up and give space like loose jeans, but I'd rather give Haz a hard time like bad dreams/
Shake this nigga whole foundation like bad beams, whoever told Haz he was nice must be blowing mad steam/   
 

       

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Punches: ER
Personals: ER
Flow: Tied
Multis: ER
Creativity: ER

Man the whole time i was reading ER's i was just like "Nice, Damn" the whole way, enjoy'd reading it, great battle verse
Haz, just his rep and all i ws expecting him to bring more then what i read, i got kinda bored and thought Haz had not many effort in this battle
Really didnt like this bar

Haz wrote:Who Cares If you're Clothes Is Fly?? Hes 1 Unfocused guy
Ya Hairline Looks like Pacman's Mouth Is Aiming 4 Ya NOSE N EYES

My vote goes to ER

Personals: Haz (was gonna give it to ER originally, but his personals fell off after the beginning, would have been better to have scattered a few here and there instead of doin em all at first. Haz had a personal on almost every line though, not all were great but some were solid.)

Punches: ER (I don't think Haz's punches did much bruising, I'd say ER was a step up in this. Came with more 'umff')

Flow: ER (I've seen much better flows from Haz before, the rhyme schemes were real basic here though. He did have a few multis, but they were pretty basic. ER had the music within the flow, multis were just about on bar with Haz, maybe a bit better, but the rhythm of the words was real evident to me, and smooth)


Overall: ER

This was close but I'd say ER edged it he came with more entertaining lines and creativity. I ain't have any complaints about Haz's verse for the most part but bars 3 & 4 really fucked ya chances. Bar 5 coulda been worded better but I still got what ya meant. From bar 3 onwards ER just came much nicer than Haz and seemed to put more thought into it, I was just feelin his verse more. Vote - ER.

3-0 close it up!!

Good battle Haz

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