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Topic - you have just learned that you have an evil twin and you were seperated from birth

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-- Mon Oct 11, 2010 9:13 pm --

aiight man apologise for the lateness my verse will be posted latest wednesday

It was just another average day spent thumbing through the manuscripts, I've been hunting demons my whole life " i can handle it"

thats what i told myself just then a gust of wind busted in i struggled just to keep a candle lit

a book i'd never seen opened "something big was about to happen" at least according to these transcripts

I was born a demon hunter, raised and trained in the ways of the order of the dragon,

before my teacher died he said i'd have to fix a seal he told me, "polish up your skills for soon all will be revealed"

its not often i get chills less often that i kneel, still " Lord forgive me for all the men that i have killed"

i searched all the texts and yet no mention of a seal, until i saw the 4 letters and an address scribbled in a margin

i grabbed my gear and left at midnight knowing demons are only out when its the darkest

i clutched a vial of earth preserved from the grounds of the first church my lucky charm i think it prevents curses

whats up with my nerves i'm unsure it isnt like me to be nervous theres something different but what im uncertain

all of a sudden i shuddered a chill ran up my spine, someone had snuck up right behind me in his hand he clutched a mic

as he advanced i jumped aside he'd set a trap to his surprise i adapted to his tactics smashed his track and crushed the mic

i yelled "is that the best you've got demon?, come on out and show yourself!"

"very well" he replied, appeared then asked " how well do you know yourself!"

i dropped the vial "Oh shit" this man is me and handing pieces of my ass to me

my whole world was collapsing fast i fell apart how can this be

he said he'd killed my teacher and i was the reason we didn't have a mother "YOU MUTHERFUCKER"

I screamed, "for that i'll make you suffer" and threw a punch with all the strength that i could muster

as he fell i yelled i am the last dragon he laughed then said brother i'm the last dragon slayer

he stood and his hands started to glow i knew i didn't have a prayer for the first time i was scared and felt that i was unprepared

then i heard my teachers voice "face yourself this is why you've spent your life training in the dragons lair"..............

and then? leeroi, leeroi what happened next?
I,I,....I snapped his neck

but im doing better now the warden lets me use the computer to rap in text

i burst in first on the scene and what i witness resembles a bad dream
like something from the big screen,utterly shocked i stilfe a scream
blood covers all the walls,left with bodies discarded like litter over the floor
everyone left hanging like a peice of meat,with their throats sliced till they cant bleed nomore
horrified that some evil psycho did this,killed everyone so there is not one witness
this is just some sick shit,every single one taken away like a fat mans fitness
a complete mad man on the loose,and now its my job to try and find out who
so i start to pace the room,combing over every single little object just to find a clue
i find a door and go inside,turn on a light,now im even more shocked at the sight i find
some lady half dressed drenched in blood screaming crying and going absolutely out her mind
she gets up and starts to run,i make chase,whats she hiding i got to find out what she has done
"im a police officer" i shout "stay where you are,ive got a gun"
she turns to face me,as she starts to speak i start to retreat,theres a figure coming from the shadow
i stand there with my mouth agape,utterly confused mind racing how did i not know
feel faint,my vision starts to blur and my brain aches with all of this confusion
i stand completely still as he opens his mouth to speak "hello brother,i thought this would get your attention"

I'm going with LG on this one here... His storyline was a lot better IMO and his verse flowed greatly.... Need I say more??

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aiight 1-0 leeroi

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i actually think this was a pretty close battle. i just think LG had a more creative story. i enjoyed both stories but i think LG edged it out on this one.

agree with the others leerois had a better storyline and flowed better both were sorta poetic but i think leeroi pulled it off better overall

3-0 KO leeroi wins - records updated