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Punches
Nameplay/Wordplay
Personals
Multies/flow
Complexity
Enjoyment



6 bars, due 48 hours after he checks in



this is my check

Chiggity Check


Dont forget to post the link to your vote. Ill post mine up when I put my verse up.

-- Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:33 am --

Aight here's my link

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/omega ... ml#p153022


Good luck sir... You're gonna need more than a little talent

Let me inform the readers of this battle wtf Quix comes from, and what it means...


QUIX·ot·ic ---kwikˈsätik---
Adjective: Exceedingly idealistic; UNREALISTIC and impractical


AYO.....



'Set part of you straight', the 'X in ya name' and fuckin 'QUIT', BITCH
Murk with one, this 'dumbass' get 'Da OH!' like 'Homer SIMPSON'!!!/

Ya 'name comes up short', so sick I should FILL HIS SCRIPTS IN
How 'QUIX' gonna recognize ME when 'YOU'RE defined as unREALISTIC'??/

FIST TO FIST ITS a verbal PISTOL WHIP, QUIX... there's more WEAPONS TO MEET
While your 'head's shoved up James' ass like you're a 'REP FOR THE HEAT'!!!/

Reap what you sow? Ill come COP YA HARVEST, your drug deposits NOT A PROFIT
Speakin of which, Quix, shit... I heard you was hiding in SCOTT'S CLOSET!!!/

I spit venom, you just a fly in the web, "surrender" or get TORTURED AND RATTLED
Fuckin with ME?!? The only way you get a 'calm Bill' of debt is to "'FORFEIT" THE BATTLE'!!!/

These dudes ready for the cush, doper, sicker than this fuckin WHORE LOOKS
Half lines BEFORE ya bars?!? you couldn't sway peoples vote as GEORGE BUSH!!!/











EXPOS FOR THOSE THAT DONT KNOW...
-IF YOU STRAGHTENED THE LETTER X, YOU GET A t THERFORE CHANGING QUIX TO QUIt (I cant believe Im actually spelling that shit out)
-quix's sig is the reference for the second bar
-Known 'cheerleader' for Scott James... Okay, not cheerleader, you get the the point
-Peep this link if you have no idea what the calm Bill bar is referring to...
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/for-s ... 18720.html

-And the last bar is in reference to how he always throws little lines before his bars, as if to boost them before he actually says the bar, and kinda swaying votes as a result

haha serious?


I got
verses that'll 'Hurt ya joints' cuz im a beast on this site and MIGHT BE THE CORNER-STONE
your broke as a joke, and we only see 'Murk with coin' when FIGHTING WITH QUARTER-ZONE
*(beefed with Qz .. Quarter = coin)

Your ABSOLUTLEY CRAP TO ME, cuz we KNOW YOU AIN'T AN AVERAGE G, your a HOMO, JUST A FAG TO ME
your M.O's IS JUST A TRASH M.C cuz everyone knows we only feeling 'M & M' s Raps' when OPENIG THE PACKAGING
*(m & m packs)

you probably LIVE WITH OTHERS DUDES, your a Faggot don't need to pay KIDS, TO SPIT ON YOU
you deserved this, and we just have to look at 'Murk's pic' to see that QUIX JUST SHIT ON YOU
*(he has a big dodo stain on his face in his picture)

i'm soo nice, ya'll like QUIX IS A MODEL? hammer fists slam his shit, watch this BITCH GONNA TOPPLE
i'm a kill yah Patrons, cuz we all know 'ILL-a-stray-son' (illustration) like the PICS IN HIS NOVEL
*(claims to be writting a novel)

this KID GETTING THROTTLED ... and what?? your the battle mod?? pfft how? when yah SCRIPT'S ARE A JOKE
dumby thinking i'm rattled?? the only way he 'winning this battle' is by FIXING THE VOTES

so you like gay men huh? you get your DISGUISE, AND DATE-THEM your there GUY TO TAKE CUM .. lol
yor the fakest g, cuz we'll only see him 'Bare arms' when he DECIDES TO SHAVE THEM
*(dudes got more hair on his arms then most animals) just check the pic in the link

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/rugge ... 18102.html



Enjoy

Punches: M came wit harder hitting punches here... The Homer Simpson line was pretty tight too...

Nameplay/Wordplay: Nameplay was even.. Both had like one line.. The QUIt line and the M&M line.... Unless I missed something.. Wordplay is even too...

Personals: Q had more direct personals.. Diggin deep in M wit the novel line and Qz line and I think he had about 4 more lines that were very personal and non generic

Multies/flow: Murk had the flow hands down

Complexity: Nothing was really complex about either verse... The most "complex" line would have to be the straighten out the X to a t line from Murk so he gets this cat for that

Enjoyment: Murk here... This also ties into flow for me cuz the easier I can follow a verse it'll be more enjoyable... That and I needed little explaination wit Murks verse... and he had better punches and that's what battling is....


Based on Cats: Murk gets the vote

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LOL @ deleating my post/bump!


bump!

Overall: Quix

I'll break this down bar for bar tomorrow when I get off work and back from the gym.

i think murk could have re-worded some of his lines to make them a bit harder but he had some wordplay in there. got the personals with the scott lines. had some comedy in there too. i can say tighten up your flow a little bit in certain areas murk.

quix, had a better flow to his lines but to me some of his punches were a bit of a stretch. that M&M line was a miss, flow was all off and it was just set up terribly. the quarter zone line was pretty nice. i think you could have done that picture line much differently to actually make it hit hard. the novel line was a miss too, wasnt feelin that, too much of a stretch. the fixing the votes line was nice though, feelin that. i think your closer was weak, flow was all off.

i give the edge to murk

Personals: Quix
Punches: Quix
Flow: Quix

Vote: Quix

Quix Was Just Aggressive in Every Category Stated. He Executed Well Bar After Bar And Made A Complete Jester out of His Opponent. I Think Were Just Going To Have To Do Better Trying To Murk Quix in Text Battles.

Closed Caps From Quix

so you like gay men huh? you get your DISGUISE, AND DATE-THEM your there GUY TO TAKE CUM .. lol
yor the fakest g, cuz we'll only see him 'Bare arms' when he DECIDES TO SHAVE THEM
*(dudes got more hair on his arms then most animals) just check the pic in the link

It's Funny When You Can Make A Punch That's Supported By Truth. LOL Good Job Fellas

2-2

'Set part of you straight', the 'X in ya name' and fuckin 'QUIT', BITCH
Murk with one, this 'dumbass' get 'Da OH!' like 'Homer SIMPSON'!!!/
The end rhymes weren't too strong but both punches were good
Ya 'name comes up short', so sick I should FILL HIS SCRIPTS IN
How 'QUIX' gonna recognize ME when 'YOU'RE defined as unREALISTIC'??/
Not really impressive, just defining his name, it's alright
FIST TO FIST ITS a verbal PISTOL WHIP, QUIX... there's more WEAPONS TO MEET
While your 'head's shoved up James' ass like you're a 'REP FOR THE HEAT'!!!/
Lmao, nice
Reap what you sow? Ill come COP YA HARVEST, your drug deposits NOT A PROFIT
Speakin of which, Quix, shit... I heard you was hiding in SCOTT'S CLOSET!!!/
2 in a row diminishes the quality and the punch was ehh
I spit venom, you just a fly in the web, "surrender" or get TORTURED AND RATTLED
Fuckin with ME?!? The only way you get a 'calm Bill' of debt is to "'FORFEIT" THE BATTLE'!!!/
read the expo, alright, pretty creative
These dudes ready for the cush, doper, sicker than this fuckin WHORE LOOKS
Half lines BEFORE ya bars?!? you couldn't sway peoples vote as GEORGE BUSH!!!/
You could have tried harder with that concept

vs

I got
verses that'll 'Hurt ya joints' cuz im a beast on this site and MIGHT BE THE CORNER-STONE
your broke as a joke, and we only see 'Murk with coin' when FIGHTING WITH QUARTER-ZONE
*(beefed with Qz .. Quarter = coin)
Alright
Your ABSOLUTLEY CRAP TO ME, cuz we KNOW YOU AIN'T AN AVERAGE G, your a HOMO, JUST A FAG TO ME
your M.O's IS JUST A TRASH M.C cuz everyone knows we only feeling 'M & M' s Raps' when OPENIG THE PACKAGING
*(m & m packs)
I liked it, solid rhyming throughout the punch
you probably LIVE WITH OTHERS DUDES, your a Faggot don't need to pay KIDS, TO SPIT ON YOU
you deserved this, and we just have to look at 'Murk's pic' to see that QUIX JUST SHIT ON YOU
*(he has a big dodo stain on his face in his picture)
Ehhhh, no
i'm soo nice, ya'll like QUIX IS A MODEL? hammer fists slam his shit, watch this BITCH GONNA TOPPLE
i'm a kill yah Patrons, cuz we all know 'ILL-a-stray-son' (illustration) like the PICS IN HIS NOVEL
*(claims to be writting a novel)
I don't get the double entendre, how is ill a stray son?
this KID GETTING THROTTLED ... and what?? your the battle mod?? pfft how? when yah SCRIPT'S ARE A JOKE
dumby thinking i'm rattled?? the only way he 'winning this battle' is by FIXING THE VOTES
Cancels out his George Bush line
so you like gay men huh? you get your DISGUISE, AND DATE-THEM your there GUY TO TAKE CUM .. lol
yor the fakest g, cuz we'll only see him 'Bare arms' when he DECIDES TO SHAVE THEM
*(dudes got more hair on his arms then most animals) just check the pic in the link
Personal, decent closer


I'll give the vote to Murk. His Lebron line is the hardest hitting in it all. I've seen you guys battle before and I think this is weak compared to your average stuff. Still a decent battle and Quix's rhyming was rock solid.

Punches - Murk
Nameplay/Wordplay - Murk
Personals - Quix
Multies/Flow - Quix
Complexity - none really
Enjoyment - Murk

idk about everybody else but this was a close battle IMO. Quix's verse was easy to read cuz the flow was on point and the personals hit hard. not saying Murk's flow or personals were off but Quix's just topped them. a lot of fillers from both battlers IMO. in the end, Murk had more creative punches and everything else entertained me more. i would like to call this a tie but...

MVGT - MURK

Punches - Quix
Nameplay/Wordplay - Nameplay - tie nothing stood out imo, Wordplay - Quix
Personals - Merv
Multies/flow - Quix
Complexity - Tie
Enjoyment - Quix

overall pretty close i think merv was more personal but quix edged it by having more direct effective punches both had a few duds that hurt their verses

Im counting 5 to whatever votes you had. I counted two votes for you, without WIld Bill's vote because he didnt break down his vote as instructed in the beginning of the thread. However, that doesnt really matter now, does it, since I have the five votes needed to close this thing out finally.

Good battle Quix.

Records updated and thread closed.