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Posted: **Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:25 am**

Quick 7s on the punches. You know..

Aiigh..

Jack done wit pussy rappers, fuck ya female verse
Coz I'm ringin' up niggas in a line like a retail clerk.
You gon' see shells first to split these new wave fags
& Keep a click on the side like a suitcase bag.
I know you dudes hate Jack when I acquire chatter from fakes
The same ones that aint touchin' green like Tiger after his break
These liers & bastards are raped from the best creations I've spit
Talkin' Illest? Then my names on the table like reservations n shit.
A mess of casings & clips, Just know the heater I blaze
In ya ride on the otha end of tha whip like overseears & slaves.
The most in need of a thanks, you could say I'm known for all of it
When these niggas hang around my bars like clothes in a closet....shit
A how to wit da punches & the flow is rare street
Tired of niggas tryin to walk in my shoes, so now I'm goin' barefeet

Posted: **Tue Oct 26, 2010 9:25 am**

Dope shit, every line had a solid punch, the set up rhymes were a lil' simple and forced at times but the flow and structure was on point, solid shit.

Posted: **Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:39 am**

Thx for tha feed bruh.

Posted: **Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:13 am**

Nice verse here...dope punches and smooth flow...had a couple nice looking bars that i havent seen similar word play on... overall pretty solid

Posted: **Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:39 am**

J D R wrote:Quick 7s on the punches. You know..

Aiigh..

Jack done wit pussy rappers, fuck ya female verse
Coz I'm ringin' up niggas in a line like a retail clerk.

^dope

You gon' see shells first to split these new wave fags
& Keep a click on the side like a suitcase bag.

^ok

I know you dudes hate Jack when I acquire chatter from fakes
The same ones that aint touchin' green like Tiger after his break

^slick

These liers & bastards are raped from the best creations I've spit
Talkin' Illest? Then my names on the table like reservations n shit.

^weak rhyme

A mess of casings & clips, Just know the heater I blaze
In ya ride on the otha end of tha whip like overseears & slaves.

^nah

The most in need of a thanks, you could say I'm known for all of it
When these niggas hang around my bars like clothes in a closet....shit

^real close to great

A how to wit da punches & the flow is rare street
Tired of niggas tryin to walk in my shoes, so now I'm goin' barefeet

^nice closer

Very nicely flowed, relatively simple piece.

Perfect title, because it did feel like you were just kickin some punches.

Posted: **Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:05 pm**

Rugged wrote:This was pretty good, went a little crazy with the "like" punch, but overall it had its ups and downs.

This. I pretty much agree with Plex on the bar by bar break down. Last bar was my favorite.

Posted: **Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:03 am**

thx for the feed. much appreciated.

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