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Czech

You picture me, dropped by flow though, I can tell he shopped the photo
I gotta *hunch* he'll *back down* when I *ring his bell* like *Quazimoto*

OMNI FLOW, so UPPERCASE to cloud our perception, he's not loud and agressive
I'm the *National Anthem*, *play me*, I'll take those *CAPS down* in a second

Clownin' him epic; modeling B. Rabbit, actin hard-when-he's-rappin
So he *pales in comparison*...I guess *Om-aryan* like that *RnB faggot*

His art is weak, average; I'ma cut above this pussy like a Fallopian sliced
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Man...

Just give up, colossus doesn't live up to his name, no fame and I'm hotter that sixty kettles
Indestructible?, grab ya from both ends and spin ya middle, I must be playing a video game the way I'm twisting metal*

yeah...

This dude goes crazy researching, me hurting?, you can never harm me...fake
So giving out L's(licks) below the waist is the only way you're charming snakes**

haha...

Must be a cheap made grenade?, I pull the pin and leave a hole in him
You're a dud...son, ya knees hurt from the rug burn cuz that's the only way ya blowin' men***

okay, enough with the gay jokes...

I'm giving CO his first LOSS, it mUSt suck, but its alright bro
Not an x-men, the only reason you got an X on your chest, is cuz I'm looking at ya through my snipers scope****

may not be necessary, but...
*colossus is made of metal, small role in the movies, heat weakens metal so it can be manipulated, and play station game "twisted metal"
**peep his battle vs ER215, made a call out thread, and snake charmer from one of his written drops
***peep his battle vs Haz/@mbition
****when uniformed...x-men have an X patch over their heart

Collosus:

You picture me, dropped by flow though, I can tell he shopped the photo
I gotta *hunch* he'll *back down* when I *ring his bell* like *Quazimoto*

Decent punch and wordplay but wasn't aimed at Omni. 3/5

OMNI FLOW, so UPPERCASE to cloud our perception, he's not loud and agressive
I'm the *National Anthem*, *play me*, I'll take those *CAPS down* in a second

Nice! Perfect bar. 5/5

Clownin' him epic; modeling B. Rabbit, actin hard-when-he's-rappin
So he *pales in comparison*...I guess *Om-aryan* like that *RnB faggot*

I didn't get the punch. Set up was filler. 2/5

His art is weak, average; I'ma cut above this pussy like a Fallopian sliced
Strongest bars he brought to the site....[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

Strong closer. Decent wordplay. 4/5

14/20 Some good punches. Tight flow and multies through out.



Omni:

Just give up, colossus doesn't live up to his name, no fame and I'm hotter that sixty kettles
Indestructible?, grab ya from both ends and spin ya middle, I must be playing a video game the way I'm twisting metal*

Nice punch. Set up was weak though. 3/5

This dude goes crazy researching, me hurting?, you can never harm me...fake
So giving out L's(licks) below the waist is the only way you're charming snakes**

Wording was weird. The whole punch looks backwards. or something. This whole bar is a mess. 1/5

Must be a cheap made grenade?, I pull the pin and leave a hole in him
You're a dud...son, ya knees hurt from the rug burn cuz that's the only way ya blowin' men***

Weak punch again. 2/5

I'm giving CO his first LOSS, it mUSt suck, but its alright bro
Not an x-men, the only reason you got an X on your chest, is cuz I'm looking at ya through my snipers scope****

Mediocre bar overall. Punch was all right but the attempt at wordplay in the first line failed. 3/5


9/20 Omni, you tried hard with the personals but failed to turn half of them in good punches. You need to work on the set ups, too. Make them part of the punch. Or a punch all their own.



+1 Colossus

Aryans are the German white master race
Whites are pale
Omarion sings RnB

Pales in comparison, I guess Om-Aryan/Omarion like the RnB faggot

Punches: Colossus
Personals: Colossus, mainly nameplay neither were really impressive with personals
Flow/Multis: Colossus

omnis wordplay was a bit forced at points & his structure was weaker in comparison colossus had a solid verse structured pretty well only had one real dud with the aryan line

vote - colossus

BUMP

I vote Colossus just due to having better punches and having a more creative verse throughout. His bars were the strongest by far. Vote- Colossus.

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